Nov.22.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher Lara.You recommended a Movie for me yesterday.
I searched The Movie on the internet, and i downloaded that movie.
But It's not good quality to watch through computer.
I guess It doesn't release high image quality.
I'll watch the movie to release DVD.
Teacher told me to advice for less stress.
That question is hard or simple.
Becuase that is just illness of the mind.
You haven't told someone about my story in military.
I don't definitely understand your circumstance.and also i'm doubted myself about my English Expression.
When I was in military,I thought to suicide.
Becuase it's really hard to manage about general outpost.
Platoon people and Two noncom ignored my command.
I was always alone on there. and i only was one officer in there.
And If there occured something, the problems i had to be responsible about everything However I didn't suicide at that time and ultimately I could manage everthing in there.
It took alot of hard times to decide.Quite this job.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! I totaly understand all the hardships and loneliness you felt and experienced while serving in the military. But I think through that experience, you became a strong and better person now. Two thumbs-up!!! Just keep on believin [이름]. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Hi Teacher Lara.You recommended a Movie for me yesterday.
>> Hi Teacher Lara. You recommended a movie to me yesterday.I searched The Movie on the internet, and i downloaded that movie.
>> I searched the movie on the internet and I downloaded it.But It\'s not good quality to watch through computer.
>> But it\'s not a good quality to watch in the computer.I guess It doesn\'t release high image quality.
>> I guess it was not yet released in a high image quality.I\'ll watch the movie to release DVD.
>> I\'ll watch the movie if it\'s already released in DVD.Teacher told me to advice for less stress.
>> Teacher told me to give an advice about less stress.That question is hard or simple.
>> Correct Becuase that is just illness of the mind.
>> Because that is just a mental illness.You haven\'t told someone about my story in military.
>> Correct I don\'t definitely understand your circumstance.and also i\'m doubted myself about my English Expression.
>> I don\'t definitely understand your circumstance and I also doubt myself about my English expressions.When I was in military,I thought to suicide.
>> When I was in military, I thought about commiting suicide.Becuase it\'s really hard to manage about general outpost.
>> Because it\'s really hard to manage the general outpost.Platoon people and Two noncom ignored my command.
>> Platoon people and two noncom ignored my command.I was always alone on there. and i only was one officer in there.
>> I was always alone there and was the only officer left behind.And If there occured something, the problems i had to be responsible about everything However I didn\'t suicide at that time and ultimately I could
manage everthing in there.
>> And if something would happen the problem is I am responsible for everything. On the other hand, I didn\'t commit suicide and was able to managed everything there.It took alot of hard times to decide.Quite this job.
>> It took me a lot of hard times to decide to quit this job.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.