Nov.22.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher Verna.In fact,I can't definitely listen to your Voice yesterday.
I don't know why.
Teacher told me to Do homework. kkk
I hear the sound after a long time. i guess In ten years.
What did you do yesterday?
I tested other English site for knowing my level.And that site manager called me to infom my condition.
She said. Have you ever studied abroad?
I guess that letters intended to lure my money.
She told me, you're very good,But i'm not that bad.
Compliment makes dancing of whale.I appreciate you help.
I looked for other conversation school on my city.
It decreases temperature after rain.
I guess I'll will die all people about nature in the future.
We have to preserve Nature in the future for our children.
However i don't care nature Only to live well.
According to Maslow's hierarchy of needs in pedagogy.
He separated people's desire level in his logic.
That's right to live the logic.
The logic doesn't refer nature becuase He didn't think nature at that time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
thank you so much for your composition. I\'m so glad to receive one again. I always admire you for your diligence. Keep up the good work!
-T.Verna-
Hi Teacher Verna.
>>Correct
In fact,I can\'t definitely listen to your Voice yesterday.
>>CorrectI don\'t know why.
>>CorrectTeacher told me to do homework. kkk
>>CorrectI hear the sound after a long time. i guess In ten years.
>>I heard that message again after a long time. Iguess after ten years.What did you do yesterday?
>>CorrectI tested other English site for knowing my level.
>>Correct
And that site manager called me to infom my condition.
>>CorrectShe said, have you ever studied abroad?
>>CorrectI guess that letters intended to lure my money.
>>CorrectShe told me, you\'re very good, but I\'m not that bad.
>>CorrectCompliment makes dancing of whale.I appreciate you help.
>>Compliments make a dancing whale. I appreciate your help.I looked for other conversation school in my city.
>>CorrectIt decreases temperature after the rain.
>>CorrectI guess I\'ll will die all people about nature in the future.
>>I guess I\'ll die because of nature in the future.We have to preserve the nature in the future for our children.>>Correct
However i don\'t care nature Only to live well.
>> However, I don\'t care about the nature only to live well.
According to Maslow\'s hierarchy of needs in pedagogy.
>>CorrectHe separated people\'s desire level in his logic.
>>CorrectThat\'s right to live the logic.
>>CorrectThe logic doesn\'t refer to nature becuase He didn\'t think nature at that time.
>>The logic doesn\'t refer to the nature because he didn\'t think of it before.
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