Nov.23.2011

2011-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Teacher Verna. How is the weather over there? In Korea, It's raining now. Did you search for Broccoil Yoo too? My ringtone name is " Until not Annoying Neighbour " I don't definitely know that it's right about translation. But i told you Before. -_- You always told me, "I'll check it but you always broke about that" However I don't care it because I know your circumstance. I could understand your mind. so you dont care from my lips before. This song inserted into one advertisement. Time is moving fast nowadays. Where do i go somewhere i'm considering. I'm planning to go to other country after a month. But I don't know and i don't choose what i go. Is safety in your Country? Many people go to your country,so My father recommended there. Suddenly I'm confused thinking about it And That Topic makes me exciting. your blood type is B. is it right? I guess you have B type. What kind of Blood type do i have? See you later.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름],         wow! The topics you mention in this composition are so interesting. I have seen the video of broccoli already. It\'s cute but I don\'t understand the lyrics. kikiki.. About the safety in the Philippines, I think it is safe there are many foreigners here. And my blood type... it\'s O. ^^ Let\'s talk more about these things in our class. see you later! -Verna- Hi Teacher Verna. >>CorrectHow is the weather over there? >>CorrectIn Korea, It\'s raining now. >>CorrectDid you search for Broccoli Yoo too? >>CorrectMy ringtone name is \" Until not Annoying Neighbour \" >>My ringtone title is \" Don\'t Annoy your Neighbor\" ( Is this what you mean?)I don\'t definitely know that it\'s right about translation. >>I don\'t definitely know if the translation was right.But i told you Before. -_- >>CorrectYou always told me, \"I\'ll check it but you always broke about that\" >>You always tell me that \" I\'ll check it later, but you always break it\"However, I don\'t care  it because I know your circumstance. >>However, I don\'t care about it  because I know your situation.I could understand your mind. so you dont care from my lips before. >>I could understand your thoughts so don\'t care about what I say.This song was inserted in one advertisement. >>CorrectTime is moving fast nowadays. >>CorrectWhere do i go somewhere i\'m considering. >>I\'m considering to go somewhere.I\'m planning to go to other country after a month. >>I\'m planning to go to other country after a month.But I don\'t know and i don\'t choose what i go. >>But I don\'t know, I haven\'t chosen yet.Is safety in your Country? >>Is it safe in your country?Many people go to your country,so My father recommended there. >>Many people think about going to your country, so my father recommended me to go there.Suddenly I\'m confused thinking about it. >>Suddenly, I\'m confused as I think about it.And That Topic makes me exciting. >>And that topic makes me feel excited.Your blood type is B. Is it right? >>CorrectI guess you have B type. >>I guess you are blood type B.What kind of Blood type do i have? >>CorrectSee you later. >>Correct

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