Nov.24.2011.

2011-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi Teacher Lara. Today is a happy Thursday to come a little more Weekend. I went to other academy to check my condition yesterday. The class is almost freetalking lesson. Such as this question, they asked me. Have you made any plans with your friends for this week? This week.i think i'm going to Seoul because of my friends. My friends are would-be singer.so they entered to learn singing skill at the entertainment company. When I was in University, i palyed a little guitar with them. but My playing skill was really terrible in my memory. Anyway,I always support them. One of them promised me to sing at my wedding day. One person entered some famous company in Korea. How do you make friends? It's important to make people. As far as i have experienced,We couldn't avoid making people except insane people. when I worked as manager.i felt acutely alot of feeling. i guess,Making people give way to them. and I'm Gyeongsang man,don't like lie,they had just truth. It's ok.

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Howdy [이름]!!!  Your way of writing is obviously improving  I\'m so proud of you. Just follow what your heart desires and everything will come into place. Kk. And just to answer your question of how do I make friends. It\'s so easy, I JUST SMILE!!  Take care and talk to you soon then.   Hi Teacher Lara. >> CorrectToday is a happy Thursday to come a little more Weekend. >> Today is a happy Thursday, one more day and it\'s weekend again.I went to other academy to check my condition yesterday. >> I went to a different academy to check on my level yesterday.The class is almost freetalking lesson. >> CorrectSuch as this question, they asked me. >> CorrectHave you made any plans with your friends for this week? >> CorrectThis week.i think i\'m going to Seoul because of my friends. >> This week, I think I\'m going to Seoul because of my friends.My friends are would-be singer.so they entered to learn singing skill at the entertainment company. >> My friends are would-be singers. They entered in an entertainment company to enhance more of their skill.When I was in University, i palyed a little guitar with them. >> When I was in a university, I played a little guitar with them.but My playing skill was really terrible in my memory. >> But my guitar skill was really terrible as far as I can remember.Anyway,I always support them. >> CorrectOne of them promised me to sing at my wedding day. >> CorrectOne person entered some famous company in Korea. >> CorrectHow do you make friends? >> CorrectIt\'s important to make people. >> It\'s important to make friends with people. >> It\'s important to meet people.As far as i have experienced,We couldn\'t avoid making people except insane people. >> As far as I have experienced, we couldn\'t avoid meeting people except for the insane ones.when I worked as manager.i felt acutely alot of feeling. >> When I worked as a manager, I felt overwhelmed.i guess,Making people give way to them. >> I guess meeting people gives way.and I\'m Gyeongsang man,don\'t like lie,they had just truth. >> I\'m a Gyeongsang citizen, I don\'t like lying, I just want the truth.It\'s ok. >> Correct  

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