Nov.24.2011.

2011-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Teach Verna. Today is a happy Thursday. Do you ever lie to your friends? I used to do it in my school days,I think I want to be attenntive to other people. but I m getting older these days,It's not necessary to lie the reason why that problem put me to shame. I love myself,I don't know why i have to do it. Nowadays, I don't speak about lying. And i was born in Gyeongsang Do. Korean people Know G.S.D men's attitude who don't like lying. That's all. What do you envy most about your friends. Normally I don't care my friends's success becuase I know they tried alot of efforts for success. But one of my best friends who is my military fellow. He work for big department store in Korea as Vice boss. Becuase his father is boss. We meet every mouth on the Seoul,so I talked about making money, selling strategy and luring customers. But I'm bumming Now,I'm not working at the moment. Yes.I envy particular him.

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Hello there [이름],       An extravagant Thursday to you! Time flies! Wow! Lying?! Well, I cannot say that I\'m totally honest but I always try to be honest. It is hard specially if you might hurt others but telling the truth however we should do our best to be truthful as we can. And about being envious?! That\'s another thing. I can say that there are also people that I am enviuos of but of course I set them as inspiration to be successful. I think you are doing a lot of self reflection these days ^^ That\'s good! See you in class! Seize the day! -T.Verna-   Hi Teach Verna. >>CorrectToday is a happy Thursday. >>CorrectDo you ever lie to your friends? >>CorrectI used to do it in my school days, I think I want to be attentive to other people. >>Correctbut I m getting older these days,It\'s not necessary to lie the reason why that problem put me to shame.>>But I\'m getting older. These days, it is not necessary to lie and this is why I was put to shame.I love myself, I don\'t know why i have to do it.>>CorrectNowadays, I don\'t speak about lying.>>Correct And I was born in Gyeongsang Do. >>CorrectKorean people Know G.S.D men\'s attitude who don\'t like lying. >>Korean people know G.S.D men\'s attitude. They don\'t like lying. That\'s all.>>CorrectWhat do you envy most about your friends.>>CorrectNormally I don\'t care my friends\'s success becuase I know they tried alot of efforts for success. >>Normally, I don\'t care about my friends\' success because I know they tried a lot of efforts to be successful.But one of my best friends who is my military fellow. >>But one of my best friends in the military.He work for big department store in Korea as Vice boss. >>He works for a big department store as the vice president.Becuase his father is the boss.>>CorrectWe meet every mouth on the Seoul,so I talked about making money, selling strategy and luring customers. >>We meet every month in Seoul, so I talked about making money, selling strategy and luring costumers.But I\'m bumming now, I\'m not working at the moment.>>CorrectYes.I envy particular him. >>Yes, I envy him in particular. >> Yes, I particularly envy him.  

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