Nov.25.2011.

2011-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi Teacher. Today is a happy Friday. Nowadays,I fall in some slump about Enlgish studying. I think that coming to us when we do something can understand about it.Anyway,I have to cheer up. I'm sorry for yesterday's my mistake. Teacher's lips is all right. What are you going to do on your weekend? As far as I've experienced, you'll watch something and clean your house,clothes postponed for a week. I feel a little tired this week, maybe the season is changing fast winter. We have to keep healthy body care during the change of seasons. This question is my freetalking book. Do you think you are better than your friends. I don't have something better than my friends that's why i don't think about this topic. I don't care other people's success because I know that they tired alot of efforts is reasonable. Dare i say it,I'm speaking better than my friends. when I was in military,I speechified over 300 people and i rarely reported to general. i guess This thing is my strength.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!  hoping that you\'ll also have a meaningful weekend ahead. Take care and talk to you soon then,   Hi Teacher. >> CorrectToday is a happy Friday. >> CorrectNowadays,I fall in some slump about Enlgish studying. >> Nowadays, I fell in to some slump about studying English.I think that coming to us when we do something can understand about it.Anyway,I have to cheer up. >> I think that when it came to us, we have to do something to understand it. Anyway, I have to cheer up.I\'m sorry for yesterday\'s my mistake. >> I\'m so sorry for my mistake yesterday.Teacher\'s lips is all right. >> Teacher\'s right.What are you going to do on your weekend? >> CorrectAs far as I\'ve experienced, you\'ll watch something and clean your house,clothes postponed for a week. >> As far as I know, you\'ll watch something, clean your house and do the laundry.I feel a little tired this week, maybe the season is changing fast winter. >> I feel a little tired this week, maybe the season is changing fast to winter.We have to keep healthy body care during the change of seasons. >> We have to keep a healthy body during the change of season.This question is my freetalking book. >> This question is from my freetalking book.Do you think you are better than your friends. >> Do ou think you are better that your friends?I don\'t have something better than my friends that\'s why i don\'t think about this topic. >> I don\'t think that I\'m better than my friends so that\'s why I don\'t care about this topic.I don\'t care other people\'s success because I know that they tired alot of efforts is reasonable. >> I don\'t mind other peoples\' success because I know that they are tired with too much efforts.Dare i say it,I\'m speaking better than my friends. >> Dare to say that I\'m a better speaker than my friends.when I was in military,I speechified over 300 people and i rarely reported to general. >> When I was serving in the military, I made a speech in front of 300 people and I rarely reported to my general.i guess This thing is my strength. >> I guess this thing is my strength.

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