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Hi! teacher! T.G.I Friday ^^ ~ I so expect this weekend~ Anyway i want to tell you something about my school's lunches Students at Korean schools enjoy their lunch in a number of ways. There are schools that serve students meals designed by in-house dietitians. This is to ensure the kids have well-balanced meals. The majority of schools have cafeterias where student can eat. But some schools don't, and the food is brought to the classrooms. Students eat their meals at their desks. They are served rice, various side dishes, and the soup of the day on their trays. Some schools don't have their own cooking facilities, so students bring their own lunches from home. They're usually simple Korean-style meals pack in lunch boxes. Students share their lunches with one another. It takes about an hour to finish this writting. ㅠㅠㅠㅠ See you soon my teacher ^^

Hi my dear Yoon! Thank you for your composition. You did a great job!! Pease keep up the good work!!!  I hope to see you soon too. Have a nice day and Take care always!!!   Here are my corrections: Hi! teacher! >>Hi Teacher!T.G.I Friday ^^ ~ I so expect this weekend~ >>T.G.I Friday ^^ I expect this weekend to be really good!Anyway i want to tell you something about my school\'s lunches >>Correct! But please don\'t forget your punctuation mark at the end of the sentence-period. Students at Korean schools enjoy their lunch in a number of ways. >>Correct! There are schools that serve students meals designed by in-house dietitians.>>Correct!This is to ensure the kids have well-balanced meals. >>This is to ensure that kids have a well-balanced meals. The majority of schools have cafeterias where student can eat. >>Majority of the schools have cafeterias where students can eat.But some schools don\'t, and the food is brought to the classrooms.>>But some schools don\'t, and foods are brought to the classrooms.Students eat their meals at their desks. >>Correct!They are served rice, various side dishes, and the soup of the day on their trays. >>They are served with rice, various dishes, and soup of the day that are placed on their trays.Some schools don\'t have their own cooking facilities, so students bring their own lunches from home. >>Correct!They\'re usually simple Korean-style meals pack in lunch boxes. >>They\'re usually simple Korean-style meals packed in lunch boxes.!Students share their lunches with one another. >>Correct!It takes about an hour to finish this writting. ㅠㅠㅠㅠ >>correct! >>It takes an hour for me to finish this writing. See you soon my teacher ^^ >>Correct!