Nov.27.2011.

2011-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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What did you do on the weekend? I went to seoul and then i met my friends who would-be singers,department mink dress vice present, and graduate student. I don't enjoy drinking that's why they yielded for me. We had dinner and then went to mink friend house. We all military fellow or junior military, We talked about military at that time. Most of backbiting But i love that memory. Anyway,Whenever i take train that i felt a little inconvenient about KTX. If you have took that transportation,you could also agree my opinion. The most problem is every narrow. aisle and seat interval. We have to develop more intensive about considering construction. maybe i think above all about this problem that's why my major was civil engineering and i have a certification construction However i served as general outpost captain for twelve mouths. Do you miss your old best firends? I think that Many people liked me Because I was an active person to every people howevery i was myself lonely.

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Hi [이름]!!!  It\'s nice to know that you had a great time with your would-be singer friends last weekend. Well as for me, I just stayed home and watched movies again-as usual..  Take care and talk to you soon then.   What did you do on the weekend? >> CorrectI went to seoul and then i met my friends who would-be singers,department mink dress vice present, and graduate student. >> I went to Seoul and met my friends who are the would-be singers.I don\'t enjoy drinking that\'s why they yielded for me. >> I don\'t enjoy drinking that\'s why they already yielded to offer me.We had dinner and then went to mink friend house. >> We had dinner and went to one of my friend\'s house.We all military fellow or junior military, >> We were fellow soldiers in the military.We talked about military at that time. >> We talked about military during that time.Most of backbiting But i love that memory. >> More on combatting but I love to recall that memory.Anyway,Whenever i take train that i felt a little inconvenient about KTX. >> Anyway, whenever I take the train, I felt a little inconvenient about KTX.If you have took that transportation,you could also agree my opinion. >> If you will try to ride in that transportation, you would agree with my opinion.The most problem is every narrow. aisle and seat interval. >> The major problems are a very narrow aisle and the gap of the seats.We have to develop more intensive about considering construction. >> We have to develop intensively on the construction.maybe i think above all about this problem that\'s why my major was civil engineering and i have a certification construction However i served as general outpost captain for twelve mouths. >> Maybe I am concern about this problem since I was a graduate of Civil Engineering and I received a certificate for construction but I served as a General outpost Captain for twelve months.Do you miss your old best firends? >> CorrectI think that Many people liked me Because I was an active person to every people howevery i was myself lonely. >> I think many people liked me because I was an active person however I was quite lonely.

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