Nov.27.2011.

2011-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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I tried to understand him however i didn't felt enjoying so i was really hard time everyday. I decided that i couldn't stand it anymore. I cut him off without some communications. But He stared to obsess me that he called me over 20 and he left a lot of messages and wrote texts to my mini homepage. But I didn't answer to him. That's all. Have your friends ever set up a blind date for you? I wanted to be introduced a blind date from my friends but i haven't done it yet. When I was in a university,I always had a girlfriend but i went to military at that time. I was always single that you could understand that place. Everyweek,I was goint to have some icecream to icecream store. in there, Manager got my phone number last year. i didn't love her, but i was lonely at that time. So I finished my military serve. i told her that we don't mix well. So I broke up with her. She tolde me, she contemplated to get married with me. So I decided that i have to escape from her.

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Hi [이름]!!!  I know how it feels like being alone and single for a long time. We are in the same boat. But it\'s nice to know that you tried to get into a relationship just to get away from the loneliness but unfortunately it didn\'t go well. I think there will always be a better person out there for you. Just wait.   I tried to understand him however i didn\'t felt enjoying so i was really hard time everyday. >> I tried to understand him but I didn\'t enjoy so I am having a hard time everyday.I decided that i couldn\'t stand it anymore. >> I decided that I couldn\'t stand it anymore. (This sentence is grammatically correct but the \"I\" should be capitalized.)I cut him off without some communications. >> I cut him off from communicating with me.But He stared to obsess me that he called me over 20 and he left a lot of messages and wrote texts to my mini homepage. >> But he started to get obsessed with me. He called me over 20 times and left me a lot of messages and he even wrote some messages on my private homepage.But I didn\'t answer to him. >> but I didn\'t answer him.That\'s all. >> CorrectHave your friends ever set up a blind date for you?>> CorrectI wanted to be introduced a blind date from my friends but i haven\'t done it yet. >> I wanted to be introduced for a blind date by my friends but I haven\'t done it yet.When I was in a university,I always had a girlfriend but i went to military at that time. >> When I was in university, I always had a girlfriend but when I went to military, I became single.I was always single that you could understand that place. >> I have been single sence then that you could understand that situation.Everyweek,I was goint to have some icecream to icecream store. >> Every week I used ti have some ice cream from an ice cream store.in there, Manager got my phone number last year. >> From there, a manager got my phone number last year.i didn\'t love her, but i was lonely at that time. >> I didn\'t love her but I was lonely at that time.So I finished my military serve. i told her that we don\'t mix well. So I broke up with her. >> So when I finished my military service, I told her that we didn\'t get along well and I broke up with her.She tolde me, she contemplated to get married with me. >> She told me that she thought of getting married with me.So I decided that I have to escape from her. >> Correct

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