Nov.27.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher Lara.
What did you do on the weekend?
It's winter,it's so cold. you have to keep your body or mind health.
The question is my freetalking Topic tomorrow.
I just write it.
Have you ever experienced one sided love?
Yes,I have often,as far as i've experienced most intensive one.
When i was in a university freshman.
I went to a club in university because of friends.
I went there,I fell in love at first sight to one-girl.
She has big eyes, white skin and looks intelligent.
But she already have a boyfriend who is my best friend.
i couldn't express my mind to her. and then after two years.
We met at the club.I know that she broke up with my friend that's why he went to military.
I told her.I liked you for three years.
But I felt a little guilty from my friend.
He came to me frist vacation and then, He didn't tell anything to me. says with a smile.
As far as I know, he know but Just smile.
And then We didn't meet after that.
I think i'm a bad boy.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Hmmmm.. One-sided love affair..? Well, am too familiar with that idea. Ha ha. I think we all have our hard times when it comes to L-O-V-E. We all have our own stories. Want to hear my story..?? Talk to you soon then.
Hi Teacher Lara.
>> CorrectWhat did you do on the weekend?
>> CorrectIt\'s winter,it\'s so cold. you have to keep your body or mind health.
>> It\'s almost winter, it\'s so cold. You have to keep your body and mind healthy.The question is my freetalking Topic tomorrow.
>> The question is about my freetalking topic tomorrow.I just write it.>> i just wrote it.Have you ever experienced one sided love?>> CorrectYes,I have often,as far as i\'ve experienced most intensive one.
>> Yes, I have often experienced a most intensive one.When i was in a university freshman.
>> When I was a freshman in university.I went to a club in university because of friends.
>> I joined a club in my university because of my friends. I went there,I fell in love at first sight to one-girl.
>> I went there and I fell in love at first-sight to one girl.She has big eyes, white skin and looks intelligent.
>> CorrectBut she already have a boyfriend who is my best friend.
>> But she already had a boyfriend who was my bestfriend.
i couldn\'t express my mind to her. and then after two years.>> I couldn\'t express my thoughts to her and then after two years.We met at the club.I know that she broke up with my friend that\'s why he went to military.
>> CorrectI told her.I liked you for three years.>> I told her that I liked her for three years.But I felt a little guilty from my friend.
>> But I felt little guilty for my friend.He came to me frist vacation and then, He didn\'t tell anything to me. says with a smile.
>> He approached me during our vacation and he didn\'t say anything to me.As far as I know, he know but Just smile.>> As far as I know, he knew about it but he just smiled.And then We didn\'t meet after that.
>> And then we didn\'t meet again after that.I think i\'m a bad boy.
>> I think I\'m a bad boy.
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