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2011-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Hi Teacher Lara. What did you do on the weekend? It's winter,it's so cold. you have to keep your body or mind health. The question is my freetalking Topic tomorrow. I just write it. Have you ever experienced one sided love? Yes,I have often,as far as i've experienced most intensive one. When i was in a university freshman. I went to a club in university because of friends. I went there,I fell in love at first sight to one-girl. She has big eyes, white skin and looks intelligent. But she already have a boyfriend who is my best friend. i couldn't express my mind to her. and then after two years. We met at the club.I know that she broke up with my friend that's why he went to military. I told her.I liked you for three years. But I felt a little guilty from my friend. He came to me frist vacation and then, He didn't tell anything to me. says with a smile. As far as I know, he know but Just smile. And then We didn't meet after that. I think i'm a bad boy.

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Hi [이름]!!!  Hmmmm.. One-sided love affair..? Well, am too familiar with that idea. Ha ha.  I think we all have our hard times when it comes to L-O-V-E. We all have our own stories. Want to hear my story..?? Talk to you soon then.   Hi Teacher Lara. >> CorrectWhat did you do on the weekend? >> CorrectIt\'s winter,it\'s so cold. you have to keep your body or mind health. >> It\'s almost winter, it\'s so cold. You have to keep your body and mind healthy.The question is my freetalking Topic tomorrow. >> The question is about my freetalking topic tomorrow.I just write it.>> i just wrote it.Have you ever experienced one sided love?>> CorrectYes,I have often,as far as i\'ve experienced most intensive one. >> Yes, I have often experienced a most intensive one.When i was in a university freshman. >> When I was a freshman in university.I went to a club in university because of friends. >> I joined a club in my university because of my friends. I went there,I fell in love at first sight to one-girl. >> I went there and I fell in love at first-sight to one girl.She has big eyes, white skin and looks intelligent. >> CorrectBut she already have a boyfriend who is my best friend. >> But she already had a boyfriend who was my bestfriend. i couldn\'t express my mind to her. and then after two years.>> I couldn\'t express my thoughts to her and then after two years.We met at the club.I know that she broke up with my friend that\'s why he went to military. >> CorrectI told her.I liked you for three years.>> I told her that I liked her for three years.But I felt a little guilty from my friend. >> But I felt little guilty for my friend.He came to me frist vacation and then, He didn\'t tell anything to me. says with a smile. >> He approached me during our vacation and he didn\'t say anything to me.As far as I know, he know but Just smile.>> As far as I know, he knew about it but he just smiled.And then We didn\'t meet after that. >> And then we didn\'t meet again after that.I think i\'m a bad boy. >> I think I\'m a bad boy.

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