Nov.29.2011.

2011-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I didn't give her up. I definitely didn't know that's why i decided it.But I fell in love her in my life first. After two years. so I heard from other friends, she broke up with him. I confided her that i have been liking you for three years. I went out with her at that time. Did you ever go in a blind date? No,I haven't tried it yet. but I always pursue and I hope. I guess I had always girlfriends in university that' why i didn't try it. But Nowadays, my brother try it to get married. His job is very popular in Korean women. He often try to go on bilnd dates, but as far as i've heard from my brother. He always failed that because he's like model student. I guess he works as LG resercher. he looks like the job. I hope He get married with woman this year. What did you do today? Well,I bought some clothes and a ladder last week on the internet. so I received them.It's very convenient to buy something there. if I bought some goods over fifty dollar,writing is over.Kkk

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Hello [이름], I broke up with my boyfriend last Sunday but I think it is the only thing I don't want to talk about. I'm sorry. You can ask me anything but not about him. ^^kk -Tiny^0^ I didn\'t give her up. >>CORRECTI definitely didn\'t know that\'s why I decided it. >>CORRECT But I fell in love her in my life first. >> But I fell in love for the first time with her. After two years. so I heard from other friends, she broke up with him. >> After two years, I heard from other friends, she broke up with him. I confided her that i have been liking you for three years. >> I confided her that I have been liking her for three years. I went out with her at that time. >>CORRECTDid you ever go in a blind date? >>CORRECTNo, I haven\'t tried it yet. but I always pursue and I hope. >> No, I haven\'t tried it yet but I always pursue and I hope. I guess I had always girlfriends in university that\' why i didn\'t try it. >> I guess I always had girlfriends in university that\'s why I didn\'t try it. But Nowadays, my brother try it to get married. >> But nowadays, my brother tries it to get married. His job is very popular in Korean women. >> His job is very popular for Korean women. He often try to go on bilnd dates, but as far as i\'ve heard from my brother.He always failed that because he\'s like model student. >> He often tries to go on blind dates, but as far as I\'ve heard from my brother, he always failed that because he\'s like model student.I guess he works as LG resercher. >>spelling check: researcher >> I guess he works as LG researcher. he looks like the job. >> It looks like he likes the job. I hope He get married with woman this year. >> I hope he gets married this year. What did you do today? >>CORRECTWell, I bought some clothes and a ladder last week on the internet. >>CORRECTso I received them. It\'s very convenient to buy something there. if I bought some goods over fifty dollar, writing is over.Kkk >> So, I received them. It\'s very convenient to buy something there if I bought some goods over fifty dollars. Writing is over. Kkk

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