NOV. 3. 2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think i didn't completely wake up during our class.
I am reviewing some embarrassment.
My voice is like elementary student.
I didn't hear the word of prejudice.
I think i try to make practice more.
I was always exciting after class.
Because i had many mistakes to speak English expressions.
I looked for India movie that The title is Three idiots.
The movie is high grade point average from Korean.
I guess, you are like kind,your attitude is calm,some activity
but you have easily hurt for trivial elements.
It's just suppositions.
I am hoping that you don't care this sentences.
I imagined for your working.
If i taught Korean, and which company i affiliated.
I have to treat other people.
I know some little, it's not easy for treating people.
I wish you'll be happy. you're christian.
Alwyas cheer up. The blessing of God be upon you.
I think it's my time at the moment.
Dawn.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
Your dedication to learning is commendable! I am always happy to see you in this side of the website. You never fail to amaze me. Keep safe! See you later!
-Verna-
I think I didn\'t completely wake up during our class.>>CorrectI am reviewing some embarrassment.
>>As I was reviewing I felt some embarrassment.My voice is like an elementary student.>>CorrectI didn\'t hear the word prejudice.
>>Correct I think i try to make practice more.>>I think I need to try to practice more.I was always exciting after class.>>I always feel excited after the class.
Because i had many mistakes to speak English expressions.>>Because I had many mistakes using English expressions.I looked for India movie that The title is Three idiots.>>I looked for the Indian movie entitled \"Three Idiots\".The movie is high grade point average from Korean.>>The movie has high rating from KoreanI guess, you are like kind,your attitude is calm,some activitybut you have easily hurt for trivial elements.
>>I guess you are kind. Your attitude is calm and active. But you can easily be hurt by trivial elements.It\'s just suppositions.
>>It\'s just proposition.I am hoping that you don\'t care about this sentences.>>CorrectI imagined for your working.
>>I imagine you while working.If i taught Korean, and which company i affiliated.
>>If I taught Koreans, which company will I be affliated?I have to treat other people.>>I have to treat other people nicely.I know some little, it\'s not easy for treating people.>>I can do it a little, it is not easy to treat other people nicely.I wish you\'ll be happy. you\'re a Christian.
>>CorrectAlways cheer up.
>>Correct
The blessing of God be upon you.>>CorrectI think it\'s my time at the moment.
>>CorrectDawn.
>>Correct
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