NOV. 3. 2011.

2011-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I think i didn't completely wake up during our class. I am reviewing some embarrassment. My voice is like elementary student. I didn't hear the word of prejudice. I think i try to make practice more. I was always exciting after class. Because i had many mistakes to speak English expressions. I looked for India movie that The title is Three idiots. The movie is high grade point average from Korean. I guess, you are like kind,your attitude is calm,some activity but you have easily hurt for trivial elements. It's just suppositions. I am hoping that you don't care this sentences. I imagined for your working. If i taught Korean, and which company i affiliated. I have to treat other people. I know some little, it's not easy for treating people. I wish you'll be happy. you're christian. Alwyas cheer up. The blessing of God be upon you. I think it's my time at the moment. Dawn.

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Hi there [이름],                Your dedication to learning is commendable! I am always happy to see you in this side of the website. You never fail to amaze me. Keep safe! See you later! -Verna- I think I didn\'t completely wake up during our class.>>CorrectI am reviewing some embarrassment. >>As I was reviewing I felt some embarrassment.My voice is like an elementary student.>>CorrectI didn\'t hear the word prejudice. >>Correct I think i try to make practice more.>>I think I need to try to practice more.I was always exciting after class.>>I always feel excited after the class. Because i had many mistakes to speak English expressions.>>Because I had many mistakes using English expressions.I looked for India movie that The title is Three idiots.>>I looked for the Indian movie entitled \"Three Idiots\".The movie is high grade point average from Korean.>>The movie has high rating from KoreanI guess, you are like kind,your attitude is calm,some activitybut you have easily hurt for trivial elements. >>I guess you are kind. Your attitude is calm and active. But you can easily be hurt by trivial elements.It\'s just suppositions. >>It\'s just proposition.I am hoping that you don\'t care about this sentences.>>CorrectI imagined for your working. >>I imagine you while working.If i taught Korean, and which company i affiliated. >>If I taught Koreans, which company will I be affliated?I have to treat other people.>>I have to treat other people nicely.I know some little, it\'s not easy for treating people.>>I can do it a little, it is not easy to treat other people nicely.I wish you\'ll be happy. you\'re a Christian. >>CorrectAlways cheer up. >>Correct The blessing of God be upon you.>>CorrectI think it\'s my time at the moment. >>CorrectDawn. >>Correct

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