Nov. 3. 2011.

2011-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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I'm sorry for my listening skill is bad. And i always wake up these days for your call. I'm doing review before our class. I was looking for charice pempengco on the internet. She is very young, and so beautful. But i haven't seen her until now. And Now i'm listening to a music what you said a song. Rihanna - Umbrella. Maybe the song is confession song, umbrella mean is herself. It's impressive things that song letters are like poem. I like the poem, reading books.you know. My dream is to be writer when i was young. So i like writing and reading. I can catch The people of attitude,when i meet unfamiliar people at the memonet. my friends were surprised beacuse of me. I have very fast wits. So, my friends don't lie front of me. If God exsit, he gave me that ability. I guess that ability is becuase i read alot of books. I like psychology and novel . The weakness of novel are making for thinking,and alot of methods can find and think.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!!  It\'s really nice to know that you have the ability to psyche a persons\' attitude. That is such a skill you have!!  Just keep that ability so that you could meet different people that would help you also to become a better person.  Yesterday I\'ve said a word that you couldn\'t understand well. right? Ok the word is NOCTURNAL meaning active at night and sleeping at daytime.  Got it? I\'ll talk to you later then.   I\'m sorry for my listening skill is bad. >> I\'m sorry about my bad listening skill.And i always wake up these days for your call.>> Nowadays, I usualy wake up by your call.I\'m doing review before our class.>> I\'m reviewing before our class.I was looking for charice pempengco on the internet.>> I was looking for Charice Pempengco on the internet. (This sentence is correct it just that you have to capitalize the first letter of a persons\' name)She is very young, and so beautful. >> Correct But i haven\'t seen her until now.>> But I haven\'t seen her not until now.And Now i\'m listening to a music what you said a song.Rihanna - Umbrella.>> And now I\'m listening to Rihanna\'s song, Umbrella, the song you\'ve told me.Maybe the song is confession song, umbrella mean is herself. >> Maybe the song is a confession song, Umbrella means about herself.It\'s impressive things that song letters are like poem.>> It\'s an impressive idea that songs are written like poems.I like the poem, reading books.you know. >> I like reading poems and books, you know.My dream is to be writer when i was young. >> My dream is be a writer whe I was young.So i like writing and reading. >> So I like writing and reading.I can catch The people of attitude,when i meet unfamiliar people at the memonet. >> I can catch the person\'s attitude whenever I meet a person for the first time.my friends were surprised beacuse of me. >> My friends were surprised because of me. (This sentence should be correct but you really have to be careful with your capitalization and spelling)I have very fast wits. >> Correct So, my friends don\'t lie front of me.>> So my friends can\'t lie to me.If God exsit, he gave me that ability. >> God gave me that ability.I guess that ability is becuase i read alot of books.>> I guess I develooped that ability because I read a lot of books.I like psychology and novel . >> Correct The weakness of novel are making for thinking,and alot of methods can find and think. >> I found some weaknesses in making a novel such as it needs an intensive thinking and a thorough methods of finding facts and ideas.

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