NOV.4.2011.

2011-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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When i was my school days. I didn't like reading book. I hadn't read a book by eighteen. before reading a book. I said. entitled" Talmud" The first time i realized. I can't definitely read Korean. i was surprised myself. so,I was reading big aloud. i think after a month. I have a good voice from reading. And when i was young. I was into Japan Animation. I didn't know why i was into it. But i loved it at that time. Yhat reminds me. We have little time. I agonize our class for prolonging. I had alot of test on other web site. I heard most of filipino don't speak english. The richers use english. It that right? Maybe the true, it's a sad story. I could be sure, alot of bias exist. I don't like bias and prejudice. ignore. Becuase i have a healthy mind and a rightrous man. my friends said. Perhaps,That information is right. I don't like there. It's on subjective attitude. Teacher don't care about that. I can't do anything, but it's worry.

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Hi [이름]!!!  Just to answer your curiosity about Filipinos\' usage of the English language. Well, most Filipinos can speak and can listen well in English. Our second language is English so Filipinos are familiar with the language at a very young age. We use English in all of our subjects at school- in all of our schools.   When i was my school days. >> When I was in my school days.I didn\'t like reading book. >> Correct I hadn\'t read a book by eighteen. before reading a book. >> I started not to read books when I was 18 years old but before that, I was fond or reading.I said. entitled\" Talmud\">> I had read a book entitled Talmud.The first time i realized. >> Correct I can\'t definitely read Korean. i was surprised myself. >> I can\'t definitely read Korean, that startled me. so,I was reading big aloud. i think after a month. >> So I was reading it out loud, I think it was after a month.I have a good voice from reading.>> I developed a good voice from reading that way.And when i was young. >> Correct I was into Japan Animation. >> Correct I didn\'t know why i was into it. >> Correct But i loved it at that time.>> But I loved it during that timeYhat reminds me. >> That reminds me.We have little time. >> We have a little time.I agonize our class for prolonging. >> I agonize that we can\'t prolong our class.I had alot of test on other web site.>> I had a lot of tests/exams on other websites.I heard most of filipino don\'t speak english. >> I heard most Filipinos don\'t speak English.The richers use english.It that right?>> Only the rich people can use English, is that right?Maybe the true, it\'s a sad story. >> Maybe it\'s true, it\'s a sad idea. I could be sure, alot of bias exist.>> i could be certain, a lot of biases exist.I don\'t like bias and prejudice. ignore. >> I don\'t like being bias and prejudice, I\'ll just ignore it.Becuase i have a healthy mind and a rightrous man.my friends said.>> Because i have a healthy mind and I\'m a righteous man, that\'s according to my friends.Perhaps,That information is right. >> Perhaps, that information is right.I don\'t like there.>> Correct It\'s on subjective attitude. >> Correct Teacher don\'t care about that.>> Correct I can\'t do anything, but it\'s worry. >> i can\'t do anything but it\'s a worry.

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