Nov.4.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
It's friday
What are you doing to do on your weekend?
You know.I think i'm going to seoul city.
I'll meet my friend who would be singer.
If i recommended you about my nation's traveling.
In fact. korea is nothing special.
Just city, and I can see many many people.
If you take the subway, you can be disappionted.
Because of many people.
I had lived the seoul city for two years.
I don't like there.
If you could travel, I recommend Je Ju Do.
There is south island located.
The lsland is famous vacationland.
The saying of Korea.
Je Ju do doesn't have Two things.
Thief and Front entrance.
This is old kroean poverb.
I went there when i was sixteen on my summer vacation.
But i think it'll be expensive trip.
Because of exchange rates.
Anyway, you dream is would-be academy Boss.
I'm pretty sure if you saved little money.
Sometime, you could catch it.
Cheer up.
It doesn't betray the effort.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Thank you for encouraging me to pursue my dream to have my own academy. I realy hope that I could have it soon. Take care and talk to you soon then.
It\'s friday>> It\'s Friday.What are you doing to do on your weekend?>> What are you going to do on yur weekend?You know.I think i\'m going to seoul city.
>> You know I think I\'m going to Seoul city.I\'ll meet my friend who would be singer.>> I\'ll meet my friend who will be a singer.If i recommended you about my nation\'s traveling.>> I will recommend you some of my country\'s travelling spots.In fact. korea is nothing special.>> In fact there\'s nothing special about Korea.Just city, and I can see many many people.
>> Just in the city, I can see many people.If you take the subway, you can be disappionted.>> Correct Because of many people.>> Because of the number of people.I had lived the seoul city for two years.
>> Correct I don\'t like there.>> Correct If you could travel, I recommend Je Ju Do.
>> Correct There is south island located.>> There were the south island is located.The lsland is famous vacationland.>> The island is famous for spending vacation.The saying of Korea.>> We have a saying here in Korea.Je Ju do doesn\'t have Two things.
>> Correct Thief and Front entrance.>> Correct This is old kroean poverb.>> This is an old Korean proverb.I went there when i was sixteen on my summer vacation.
>> Correct But i think it\'ll be expensive trip.>> But I think it\'ll be an expensive trip.
Because of exchange rates.>> Because of the exchage rates.Anyway, you dream is would-be academy Boss.>> Anyway, you dream is to own an English academy.I\'m pretty sure if you saved little money Sometime, you could catch it.
>> I\'m pretty sure that if you save money, you could achieve it.Cheer up.
>> Correct
It doesn\'t betray the effort.
>> Correct
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