Now I am sitting in fornt of laptop

2013-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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but I am enjoying the rest time of saturday. It have been worse situation, if we must had studied longer. I am appreciating that. having some chocolate, I covered my face with facial mask. I always want bright but my skin color is fill my hope. even though I spend almost of the day in office, It goes darker and darker day by day. So, I need special plan with cosmetics. It is a thing between you and me, I determined I start attach Suncream! right here and right now. I realize my skin need investing. For Some day finally I have a great skin quality, I should live with passion. byebye 1. My sister works out every day, so she's in very good (shape). 2. He's not fat, but he has a bit of a (belly). 3. He's six feet (tall). 4. He walks with a (lump). 5. My grandfather has (trouble) walking fast. (= he can't walk fast easily)

강사 첨삭

Hi happy Monday!

Good job today! Thank you for sharing a secret with me.

Don\'t worry it will just be between the two of us. ^_^

Be confident and always have a positive attitude.

Now I am sitting in fornt of laptop

>>Now I am sitting in front of my laptop.

but I am enjoying the rest time of saturday.

>>But I am enjoying the rest of my Saturday.
It have been worse situation, if we must had studied longer.
>>It has become worse. We must study harder and for longer hours. 

I am appreciating that.

>>Correct!

having some chocolate, I covered my face with facial mask.

>>Correct!
I always want bright but my skin color is fill my hope.

>> I always want my skin bright but my skin color still have hope.
even though I spend almost of the day in office, It goes darker and darker day by day.

>>Correct! :)

>>Or Even though I spend most of the day in the office, it goes darker and darker everyday.
So, I need special plan with cosmetics.

>>So, I need a special cosmetics.
It is a thing between you and me, I determined I start attach Suncream!

>>It is a thing between you and me, I started using Suncream. ^_^

>>Or It is a thing between you and me, I\'m determined to use Suncream.

right here and right now. I realize my skin need investing.

>>Correct! :)
For Some day finally I have a great skin quality, I should live with passion.

>>For someday, If I finally have a great skin quality, I should live with passion. 
byebye
1. My sister works out every day, so she\'s in very good (shape).

 >>Correct! :)
2. He\'s not fat, but he has a bit of a (belly).

>>Correct! :)
3. He\'s six feet (tall).

>> Correct! :)
4. He walks with a (lump).
>>limp

5. My grandfather has (trouble) walking fast. (= he can\'t walk fast easily)

>>Correct! :)

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