now I'm not so sad. ^^*
학생이 쓴 원문
Hellow , my name is [이름], nice to meet to you I,m very happy to know the power english program. Now I'm not good at speaking ,listening and more.
After merried with my husband I have been lived as my husband's wife, and as my children;s mom. I think theses are important roles. but nowdays I'm very eager to find myself. sometimes I think , "where is my LIFE?" My life has gone after merride, so, somtimes I felt gloomy.
But Isaid to myself "I love my husband and my kids very much, although I couln't come true my dream , I'm not sad. Csuse there are my dreams in my family.
Step by step I'm going to walk to find myself, and to build my life . I believe that the power English will guide me to the good roads.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]. It's so nice of youto send this letter to me. I am happy to have you as my student. here are some revisions o your letter for you to study. God Bless
Hellow , my name is [이름], nice to meet to you I,m very happy to know the power english program.
>>Hello, my name is [이름].
nice to meet you.
>>It's nice to meet you.
I'm very happy to know the power english program.
>>I'm very happy to know about the Power English Program.
Now I'm not good at speaking ,listening and more.
>>I'm not good in speaking the English language and more.After merried with my husband I have been lived as my husband's wife, and as my children;s mom.
>>After my marriage, I've been a wife to my husband and a mother to my children.
I think theses are important roles.
>>I thik these are important roles.
but nowdays I'm very eager to find myself. sometimes I think , "where is my LIFE?"
>>But nowadays, I'm eager to find myself.
sometimes I think, "where is my Life?"
>>Sometimes I ask myself, "Where is my Life?"
My life has gone after merride, so, somtimes I felt gloomy.
>>My life has gone after my marriage.
So, somtimes I felt gloomy.
>>So. sometimes I feel sad. But Isaid to myself "I love my husband and my kids very much, although I couln't come true my dream ,
>>But often tell myslef, " I love my husband and kids very much eventhough I couldn't make my dreams come true."
I'm not sad
>>Then, I'm not sad anymore.
. Csuse there are my dreams in my family.
>>Because they are my dreams for my family Step by step I'm going to walk to find myself, and to build my life .
>>One step at a time, I will look for myself and build my life once more.
I believe that the power English will guide me to the good roads.
>>I believe that Power English will guide and light my path for a good life ahead.
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