Now I want to have some exercising
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Anna has returned to(toward) her home town.
2. The dog jumped into the lake.
3. Are the boys still swimming on the pool?
4. Thomas fell on the floor.
5. The plane landed on the runway.
Over an year, I wanted to do execersing but whenever I wanted to do, there were some tasks to do. I thought that was the reason why I put off to exercise everyday.
but I realized that It was a problem of my willness.
I'm serious I always looked back and regreted about what I didn't do.
I always have dilemma because I feel tired when I do exercise.
Doing exercise is good thing but It gives me a fatigue.
But I start trying to make good body line.
Maybe consistance is the best way to have a good bodyline.
I set a goal, to do exercise just five minute in every day.
Probably that may work.
강사 첨삭
Hello again.
Happy Monday! How are you today?
I hope that you will have a great week ahead of you.
It is really important to exercise everyday.
Try to jog with Carolyn during weekend.
It will help your relationship grow.
Try to jog with Carolyn during weekend.
It will help your relationship grow.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
>> Anna has returned ho he hometown.
2. The dog jumped into the lake.
2. The dog jumped into the lake.
>> correct
3. Are the boys still swimming on the pool?
3. Are the boys still swimming on the pool?
>> correct
4. Thomas fell on the floor.
4. Thomas fell on the floor.
>> correct
5. The plane landed on the runway.
>> correct
5. The plane landed on the runway.
>> correct
Over an year, I wanted to do execersing but whenever I wanted to do, there were some tasks to do.
>> Over a year, I wanted to exercise but whenever I wanted to, there were some tasks that I need to work on.
I thought that was the reason why I put off to exercise everyday.
>> I thought that was the reason why I put off exercising everyday.
but I realized that It was a problem of my willness.
but I realized that It was a problem of my willness.
>> But I realized that, my willingness to do it is my problem.
>> OR: But I realized that my determination to do it is my problem.
I\'m serious I always looked back and regreted about what I didn\'t do.
I\'m serious I always looked back and regreted about what I didn\'t do.
>> I\'m serious, when I look back, I always regret the things I didn\'t do.
I always have dilemma because I feel tired when I do exercise.
I always have dilemma because I feel tired when I do exercise.
>> I always have dilemma because I feel tired when I exercise.
Doing exercise is good thing but It gives me a fatigue.
Doing exercise is good thing but It gives me a fatigue.
>> Exercising is a good thing but it gives me fatigue.
But I start trying to make good body line.
But I start trying to make good body line.
>> But I start trying to have a good body.
Maybe consistance is the best way to have a good bodyline.
Maybe consistance is the best way to have a good bodyline.
>> Maybe consistence is the best way to have a good boy.
I set a goal, to do exercise just five minute in every day.
I set a goal, to do exercise just five minute in every day.
>> I set a goal to exercise even for just five minutes everyday.
Probably that may work.
Probably that may work.
>> correct
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