Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What m
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I think beauty care itself is not a problem.
If someone do a beauty care for their own satisfaction, It can\'t be a problem.
However, it can be a problem when we do it because we want to be better compared to others.
In this case, our standard is other people, not ourselves.
Therefore, we should think deeply the reason why we want to do it before we start to spend a lot of money on beauty care.
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If someone do a beauty care for their own satisfaction, It can\'t be a problem.
However, it can be a problem when we do it because we want to be better compared to others.
In this case, our standard is other people, not ourselves.
Therefore, we should think deeply the reason why we want to do it before we start to spend a lot of money on beauty care.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think beauty care itself is not a problem.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
If someone do a beauty care for their own satisfaction, It can\'t be a problem.
>>> If someone engages in it for their own satisfaction, it is perfectly fine.
However, it can be a problem when we do it because we want to be better compared to others.
OR>>> However, it can become problematic when it is done to compete with or compare oneself to others.
In this case, our standard is other people, not ourselves.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Therefore, we should think deeply the reason why we want to do it before we start to spend a lot of money on beauty care.
>>> Therefore, before spending a significant amount of time or money on beauty care, we should carefully reflect on our true motivations for doing it.
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