nowadays computer solution engineer

2020-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I will go to ilsan hospital. I got the phone my partner . He had a problem that his customer it solution didn\'t work. so I will go to help him. I think this problem simple. however, it is hard if you don`t know architecture of solution. nowadays Many IT engineer study computer solution by website.so they don`t resolve this problem.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. Good luck with that then.

- T. Beth
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I will go to ilsan hospital.

>>> I will go to a hospital in Ilsan.

I got the phone my partner .

>>> I got a call from my partner.
He had a problem that his customer it solution didn\'t work. so I will go to help him.

>>> He has a problem with a customer for a solution that did not work. So I will got here to help him.

I think this problem simple.

>>> I think this problem is simple.

however, it is hard if you don`t know architecture of solution.

>>> OR: However, it is hard if you don\'t know the structure of the solution.

nowadays Many IT engineer study computer solution by website.

>>> Nowadays, many IT engineers study computer solution through the website.

so they don`t resolve this problem.

>>> So they can`t resolve this problem.

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