Nowadays culture is much the same all around the world when compared to previous times. Do you think

2020-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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We can say that all people are living in the same country because we are living in same earth. As part of the unification movement, the culture differences among the world have been reduced. EU is one of the representative changes. They would like to unify whole Europe as the same country so everyone could work anywhere regardless of nationality. I don\'t know this movement is positive for us because there have been countless conflicts around the world. It\'s because of religion, interests and face color. Regarding religion, there have always been argument since the beginning of the world. Many countries still ban to accept different religion with their national one and we had had too many wars because of these problems. So, I think that culture around the world is not able to be same and I am not sure if there will be possibility to narrow the differences. In addition, the USA has banned to import goods from other countries and kicked foreigners out from their country because of job vac

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Hi there Mr. [이름]~! ^^ Merry Christmas to you and to your family. ^^ May the holiday season fill your home with joy, your heart with love, and your life with laughter.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
We can say that all people are living in the same country because we are living in same earth.
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 As part of the unification movement, the culture differences of the world have been reduced. 
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EU is one of the representative in changes. 
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They would like to unify the whole Europe as the same country so everyone could work anywhere regardless of nationality.
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 I don\'t know if this movement is positive for us because there have been countless conflicts around the world.
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 It\'s because of religion, interests and skin color.
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 Regarding religion, there have always been arguments since the beginning of the world. 
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Many countries still ban to accept different religions with their national one and we had had too many wars because of these problems. 
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So, I think that culture around the world is not able to be the same and I am not sure if there will be possibility to narrow the differences.
>>> CORRECT
 In addition, the USA has banned to import goods from other countries and kicked foreigners out of their country because of job...
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