Nowadays employment options are changing and employees cannot rely on having the same job and workin
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The employment options have been the major issues in our country, especially permanent and temporary positions. It cause that young people dream to get jobs which might look stable such as public servants. It also cause social grade that result in discrimination between employees. In this pandemic situation, I heard that new grade defied by professionals that are 4 grades. If people are not working in the essential companies, most of them have been encountered difficulties on their income since the pandemic started. There has been a lot of conflicts about the issue that we should hire temporary workers, if they are working for over 2 years. It has been controversial to accept temporary works without any tests or evaluations. Permanent employees have a question about qualification of temporary workers because regular workers took a test and many interviews when they were seeking jobs. They consider it as a result of their hard efforts. However, we can easily find better worker in tempor
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The employment options have been the major issues in our country, especially permanent and temporary positions.
>>> CORRECT
It cause that young people dream to get jobs which might look stable such as public servants.
>>> It can cause the young people to get their dream jobs which might look stable such as public servants.
It also cause social grade that result in discrimination between employees.
>>> It also causes social grade which results to discrimination between employees.
In this pandemic situation, I heard that new grade defied by professionals that are 4 grades.
>>> This pandemic, I heard that new grade defiled by professionals from 4 grades.
If people are not working in the essential companies, most of them have been encountered difficulties on their income since the pandemic started.
>>> If people are not working in essential companies, most of them have been encountering difficulties on their income since the pandemic started.
There has been a lot of conflicts about the issue that we should hire temporary workers, if they are working for over 2 years.
>>> CORRECT
It has been controversial to accept temporary workers without any tests or evaluations.
>>> CORRECT
Permanent employees have a question about qualification of temporary workers because regular workers took a test and many interviews when they were seeking jobs.
>>> Permanent employees ask about the qualifications of temporary workers because regular workers have taken a test and had many interviews when they were seeking for jobs.
They consider it as a result of their hard efforts.
>>> CORRECT
However, we can easily find better workers temporarily.
>>> CORRECT
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