Nowadays, many people have to work longer times, and they feel more stressful than before. What are
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The reason is a social background.
Especially standard legal work hours in Asia countries are pretty longer than Western countries.
Many asia countries think if employees work for long hours, it can be helpful for companies\' profit.
However, I think that longer working hours are unlikely to be proportionate to great productivity.
Rather, too much working hours make employees suffer from physical and mental stress and it must lower productivity.
Then, what can employers do to make their life easier?
One of the best method is to give a relax time to employees.
For example, if they reduce work times on Friday twice a month, it can make employees relieve stress and have loyalty on their companies.
By doing this kind of effort, companies can give a great working environment to thier employees.
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Especially standard legal work hours in Asia countries are pretty longer than Western countries.
Many asia countries think if employees work for long hours, it can be helpful for companies\' profit.
However, I think that longer working hours are unlikely to be proportionate to great productivity.
Rather, too much working hours make employees suffer from physical and mental stress and it must lower productivity.
One of the best method is to give a relax time to employees.
For example, if they reduce work times on Friday twice a month, it can make employees relieve stress and have loyalty on their companies.
By doing this kind of effort, companies can give a great working environment to thier employees.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
The reason is a social background.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> The reason largely stems from social and cultural norms.
Especially standard legal work hours in Asia countries are pretty longer than Western countries.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> In many Asian countries, standard legal working hours tend to be longer than in Western countries.
Many asia countries think if employees work for long hours, it can be helpful for companies\' profit.
>>> There is a common belief that longer hours directly contribute to a company’s profits.
However, I think that longer working hours are unlikely to be proportionate to great productivity.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Rather, too much working hours make employees suffer from physical and mental stress and it must lower productivity.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Then, what can employers do to make their life easier?
>>> CORRECT~!^^
One of the best method is to give a relax time to employees.
>>> One of the most effective strategies is to provide regular opportunities for relaxation.
For example, if they reduce work times on Friday twice a month, it can make employees relieve stress and have loyalty on their companies.
>>>> For example, reducing working hours on Fridays twice a month can help employees relieve stress and increase their loyalty to the company.
By doing this kind of effort, companies can give a great working environment to thier employees.
>>> By implementing such measures, companies can create a healthier, more supportive working environment.
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