Nowadays, people prefer going to malls to relax and have fun rather than taking up a hobby. Do you a
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I totally agree with this statement.
Today\'s malls provide all to the public, including cinemas, restaurants, clothing stores, hair shops and even flower shops.
They can relax and have fun at there.
If they want to take up hobby, they will go to the gym or the park rather than malls.
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I totally agree with this statement.
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Today\'s malls provide all to the public, including cinemas, restaurants, clothing stores, hair shops and even flower shops.
Today\'s malls provide all to the public, including cinemas, restaurants, clothing stores, hair shops and even flower shops.
>> Today\'s malls provide everything to the public, including cinemas, restaurants, clothing stores, hair shops and even flower shops.
They can relax and have fun at there.
They can relax and have fun at there.
>> They can relax and have fun there.
If they want to take up hobby, they will go to the gym or the park rather than malls.
If they want to take up hobby, they will go to the gym or the park rather than malls.
>> If they want to take up a hobby, they would go to the gym or the park instead of the malls.
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