Nowadays there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvant
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People could not afford to purchase a private car 30 years ago. It was one of the dream in people\'s life. However, few people don\'t have a car nowadays. I have seen people who have more than 2 cars for their family members. So, it is really important to check how many parking spaces that I can use, when we find the houses. I showed that people have more than one car in household. But people in Seoul don\'t use their car when they commute because of traffic jam. It is better to take a public transportation than drive their car. As I know, public transportation in Korea is well known for convenience to use, clean facility and not complex. It is the fastest way to go somewhere. However, people don\'t want to take a public transportation in weekends even if it is fast and convenient to use. It is because people would like to keep their load in the trunk and don\'t want their children to go to the station by walk. However, air pollution from the automobile exhaust is the issue that can be the
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People could not afford to purchase a private car 30 years ago.
>>> CORRECT
It was one of the dream in people\'s life.
>>> It was one of the dreams in people\'s life.
However, few people don\'t have a car nowadays.
>>> However, there are a few people who don\'t have a car nowadays.
I have seen people who have more than 2 cars for their family members.
>>> CORRECT
So, it is really important to check how many parking spaces that I can use, when we find the houses.
>>> So, it is really important to check how many parking spaces that\'s available, when we find houses.
I showed that people have more than one car in household.
>>> I notice that people have more than one car in household.
But people in Seoul don\'t use their car when they commute because of traffic jam.
>>> CORRECT
It is better to take a public transportation than drive their car.
>>> It is better to take public transportation than driving their own car.
As I know, public transportation in Korea is well known for convenience to use, clean facility and not complex.
>>>As I know, public transportation in Korea is well known for convenience, clean facility and not complicated.
It is the fastest way to go somewhere.
>>> CORRECT
However, people don\'t want to take a public transportation in weekends even if it is fast and convenient to use.
>>> However, people don\'t want to take public transportation on weekends even if it is fast and convenient to use.
It is because people would like to keep their load in the trunk and don\'t want their children to go to the station by walk.
>>> CORRECT
However, air pollution from the automobile exhaust is the issue that can be...
>>> CORRECT
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