Nuclear weapon.
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When the final stage of the second world war, U.S. troop attained the secret information that Japan was about to surrender through security monitoring.
U.S already finished development of nuclear weapon. But the problem is that other country such as Japan and Germany and Russia, China were also trying to develop the nuclear weapon at that time. U.S had to hold these country in check.
An atomic bomb was tested in the New Mexico desert and produced atomic weapons based on two alternate designs
So, They decided to use and test nuclear weapon in hurry. And it opened new era.
The united states dropped nuclear weapons on the Japaneses cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki in August 1945 during the final stage of World war two.
The two bombings, which killed at least 129,000 people.
The bombing’s role in Japan’s surrender and their ethical justification are still debted.
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Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^
Thank you very much for sharing this.
The invention of nuclear weapons has indeed provided a great impact not only to Japan but also to the entire world.
Today, possession of nuclear weapons signifies power.
I guess that\'s the reason why North Korea and its allies are not willing to give up these weapons.
Many people were indeed affected by the bombing incident that took place in Hiroshima and Nagasaki in 1945.
It\'s been over 70 years since it happened but the effects on the people and the place is still very prominent.
The U.S government probably refrains from apologizing because they are afraid that if they do such thing, it would make them look weak.
Maybe in their own point-of-view, it\'s a military tactic and they cannot afford to show any sign of weakness.
Especially nowadays since the US economy is currently on a shaky ground and they need to make a stand and show their prominence.
Anyhow, that\'s just my opinion on this matter.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry (^_^)
When the final stage of the second world war, U.S. troop attained the secret information that Japan was about to surrender through security monitoring.
>> During the final stage of the Second World War, the U.S troop attained the secret information that Japan was about to surrender through security monitoring.U.S already finished development of nuclear weapon.
>> The U.S already finished developing its nuclear weapons.
But the problem is that other country such as Japan and Germany and Russia, China were also trying to develop the nuclear weapon at that time.
>> But the problem was that, other countries such as Japan, Germany, Russia, and China were also trying to develop their nuclear weapons at that time.
U.S had to hold these country in check.
>> U.S had to hold these countries in check.
An atomic bomb was tested in the New Mexico desert and produced atomic weapons based on two alternate designs
>> An atomic bomb was tested in the New Mexico desert and produced atomic weapons based on two alternating designsSo, They decided to use and test nuclear weapon in hurry.
>> So, they decided to use and test the nuclear weapon in a hurry.
And it opened new era.
>> And it opened a new era.
The united states dropped nuclear weapons on the Japaneses cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki in August 1945 during the final stage of World war two.
>> The United States dropped the nuclear weapons on the Japanese cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki in August 1945 during the final stage of World War II.The two bombings, which killed at least 129,000 people.>> The two bombing incidents killed at least 129,000 people.The bombing’s role in Japan’s surrender and their ethical justification are still debted.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: They have yet to explain the bombing’s role in Japan’s surrender and their ethical justification for it.
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