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I\'ve been juggling my study and my part-time job. actually, i must not study while i doing part-time job. but, it\'s okay. i couldn\'t care less.
because i work alone. sometimes, I put the AirPods in my ear and l i make a phone call with my friends. if my boss should look this situation, boss will fire me. anyway, my part-time job is very easy and comfortable. so i think nothing is easier than my part-time job.
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Hi [이름]!
Wow, it is so nice for you to do your homework even if I didn\'t give you a topic. It just shows your enthusiasm for learning. Keep it up!
-Rachel
I\'ve been juggling my study and my part-time job.
>> I\'ve been juggling my studies and my part-time job.
actually, i must not study while i doing part-time job. but, it\'s okay. i couldn\'t care less.
>> Actually, I shouldn\'t be studying while doing my part-time job, but it\'s okay because I couldn\'t care less.
because i work alone. sometimes, I put the AirPods in my ear and l i make a phone call with my friends.
because i work alone. sometimes, I put the AirPods in my ear and l i make a phone call with my friends.
>> I work alone, so sometimes I put the AirPods in my ear and I make a phone call with my friends.
if my boss should look this situation, boss will fire me.
>> If the boss sees this situation, he will fire me.
anyway, my part-time job is very easy and comfortable. so i think nothing is easier than my part-time job.
>> correct
>> Anyway my part-time job is very convenient and comfortable, so perhaps there is nothing easier than my work.
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