ny today plan
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Hi Tia,
Thank you for answering your homework. It\'s good for everyone to live on their own at some point in their lives. There is nothing quite like having your own place, regardless of whether it is a small apartment, condo unit, house, or even just a room that is rented. Even if you only have a single experience, the whole thing can turn out to be one of the most enjoyable and fulfilling times of your life.
~Teacher Cathy
I am go to family hous get chopping board, Dishcloth, plate and more spoon it to my house
>> I will go to our family house and will get a chopping board, dishcloth, plate and more spoons and bring it to my own house.
i bought a pretty fabric poster
>> I bought a pretty fabric poster.
i also need to buy a very hard-earned tape
>>I also need to buy heavy-duty tape.
i\'ve always wanted to buy it it\'s good to bldck the sunlight
>>I\'ve always wanted to buy it because it\'s good to block the sunlight.
but it\'s a rented house can\'t nail it, you have to tape it
>>But it\'s a rented house and you can\'t put a nail on it, you have to use tape.
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