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2018-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. decision, luck 2. seem, luck 3. hope that helps / hope it helps 4. fate 5. have a good chance The decision which I make in a meeting is a very good luck for this occasion. It seemed to luck that the pebble which some kid threw passed by not striking me. I hope that helps you that I makes for your health. It is our fate that we cannot escape so we stand opposite. I have a good chance to win a lottery. You mentioned that it helps me a lot to make a longer sentence using conjunctions. But I don't know what I did well... Anyway, see you our class time. Bye. Thanks for reading.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]!^^


Thank you once again for sending your homework.


Cheers!

Jean~~


1. decision, luck
2. seem, luck
3. hope that helps / hope it helps
4. fate
5. have a good chance

The decision which I make in a meeting is a very good luck for this occasion.

>>

 It seemed to luck that the pebble which some kid threw passed by not striking me.

>> It would seem that I was lucky that I wasn\'t hit by the pebble that some kid threw at me.

 I hope that helps you that I makes for your health.

>> I hope it helps that I didn\'t do anything to affect your health. 

>> OR: I hope it helps that I gave you ginger tea so you could sleep better tonight.

 It is our fate that we cannot escape so we stand opposite.

>> We cannot escape our fate so we stand on opposite sides.

 I have a good chance to win a lottery.
>>CORRECT


 You mentioned that it helps me a lot to make a longer sentence using conjunctions.

>> CORRECT

>> [Yes, it would help if you make longer sentences by using conjunctions such as NEITHER NOR, EITHER OR, BUT, ALSO, AND, etc. You usually speak or answer with short simple sentences but your level is high enough for you to speak with compound and complex sentences. It would help you sound more fluent.]


But I don\'t know what I did well... Anyway, see you our class time.

>> But I\'m not sure if I did well. Anyway, speak with you in class.


Bye. Thanks for reading.

>> CORRECT

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