objectively..2
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He is very thoughtful man.
He told me that I was totally misunderstood him..
But I felt it strongly and I think I am not wrong..
During our conversation..we try to see our situation objectively..
But it was difficult to change each other's feeling.,.
whose feeling is right...?
I think maybe nobody knows...
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Thanks for this compo Ms. [Name]! Yeah it could be hard at times to try to prove your point to someone. That hit home. :)
He is very thoughtful man.
>> He is a very thoughtful man.He told me that I was totally misunderstood him..
>>He told me that I totally misunderstood him...But I felt it strongly and I think I am not wrong..>> But I felt so strongly about it and I think I was not wrong.During our conversation..we try to see our situation objectively..
>> During our conversation, we tried to objectively see through our situation. ( be careful with your punctuations )But it was difficult to change each other's feeling.,.>> But it was difficult to change each other's feelings.whose feeling is right...?
>> Whose feeling is right?I think maybe nobody knows...
>> I think maybe nobody knows.
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