Ocean
학생이 쓴 원문
When i hear the word ocean,i feel refreshing and dynamic.Because,there are many unknown creatures in the ocean so we can imagine dangerous fish and the waves of the ocean looks cool.
And i think jellyfish is the most beautiful things in ocean. Because,jellyfish is white so when you take a pictures, it looks like wonderful
강사 첨삭
Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
When i hear the word ocean,i feel refreshing and dynamic.
>>> When I hear the word ocean, I feel refreshed and dynamic.
Because,there are many unknown creatures in the ocean so we can imagine dangerous fish and the waves of the ocean looks cool.
>>> Because there are many unknown creatures in the ocean so we can imagine dangerous fish and the waves of the ocean looks cool.
And i think jellyfish is the most beautiful things in ocean.
>>> And I think jellyfish are the most beautiful things in the ocean.
Because,jellyfish is white so when you take a pictures, it looks like wonderful
>>> Because, jellyfish is white so when you take pictures of it, it looks like wonderful.
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