Oct 05, 2015
학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no write.
I have wrote my opinion for the second article, "PM pledges to improve S-N ties". It is a little bit miserable to deal with the article related to Mr. [Name] because he was implicated in the bribery case and finally resigned by force. Of course, he didn't accomplish any improvement in S-N ties.
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
I\'m proud of the way you worked today. I like how briefly you express your thoughts. Just remember that the present perfect is formed from the present tense of the verb have and the past participle of a verb.
example: have written
Teacher Venus^^
Long time no write.
>>>CORRECTI have wrote my opinion for the second article, \"PM pledges to improve S-N ties\".
>>>I wrote my opinion for the second article, \"PM pledges to improve S-N ties\".
It is a little bit miserable to deal with the article related to Mr. [Name] because he was implicated in the bribery case and finally resigned by force.
>>>It is a little bit miserable to deal with the article related to Mr. [Name] because he was implicated in the bribery case and finally he resigned by force.
Of course, he didn\'t accomplish any improvement in S-N ties.
>>>CORRECT
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