Oct. 31. 2011.

I'm looking for Baguio city on the website. I'll ask you tomorrow about some tough questions. You know, i'm a talkative person. If i can speak english completely, i guess, i talk slowly. Now i talk like elementary school. But you always cheer me up and waiting my response. I know, it's your job. But thank you. I Hope you to get married. I don't want to get married Now. But Marriage bless our life. It's hard to live and tired. i don't know what i Do live when i was before two years. I had had everything for my parents. went to University, and went to military officer. I has just been in moderation. But i haven't had records of any incident by this time. So, i'm not a drastic person. Anyway, thank you for your answer and modify composition. See you later. I have to go to English conversation.

Hi there! I had a good time reading your composition. Thank you so much for your time in making one. Anyway, I made some corrections for you to practice with. Talk to you soon.   T. Lara   Here are my corrections:   I\'m looking for Baguio city on the website. >>I am looking for Baguio City on the internet.I\'ll ask you tomorrow about some tough questions. >>CORRECTYou know, i\'m a talkative person.>>You know, I am a talkative person. (Try to capitalize \'I\' all the time =)) If i can speak english completely, i guess, i talk slowly.>>If I can speak English fluently, I guess I will talk slower. Now i talk like elementary school.>>Now, I talk like I am an elementary student. >>OR Now, I talk like an elementary. But you always cheer me up and waiting my response.>>But you always cheer me up and wait for my response. I know, it\'s your job. >>CORRECT But thank you.>>CORRECT I Hope you to get married.>>I hope that you will get married. >>OR I am hoping that you will get married someday. >>OR I hope that you will get married someday. I don\'t want to get married Now.>>I do not want to get married now. But Marriage bless our life.>>But marriage blesses our lives. >>But marriage blesses everyone's life. It\'s hard to live and tired. >>It is hard to live and I am tired. i don\'t know what i Do live when i was before two years.>>I did not know what am I living for two years ago. I had had everything for my parents. >>CORRECT >>OR I did everything for my parents. went to University, and went to military officer.>>I went to a university and to the military where I became a military officer. I has just been in moderation.>>I have been living in moderation. But i haven\'t had records of any incident by this time.>>But I do not have any records of incidents all this time. So, i\'m not a drastic person.>>So, I am not a drastic person. Anyway, thank you for your answer and modify composition.>>Anyway, thank  you for your answer and for modifying my composition. See you later.>>CORRECT I have to go to English conversation. >>I have to go and attend my English conversation class.