October 10 - Homework

2014-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Q : If Korea is a hotchpotch, what kind of hotchpotch would it be? I think some kind of Jjigae would be hotchpotchs. For example, Gimchi-jjigae is made of gimchi and sliced pork. Recipe is very simple. First, I put the sliced pork and Gimchi in a pot. And then I add sesame oil and fry them in the pot without water. When they get well mixed, I pour water until they are soaked into water. And then boil them sufficiently and add some salt and vegetables. It's all.

강사 첨삭

What a hotchpotch! Reading this kind of composition truly makes me hungry. Thank you for the detail process of making Gimchi-Jjigae, [이름]! I think I can make one in a snap. In my opinion, Korea can also be a hotchpotch of \"VISUAL CULTURES\". I bet you know this very well. If you want us to discuss this a little further, please let me know. I will just keep it hanging at this hour, just to awaken your curiosity. I will catch you then! Have a wonderful time. _Klein Q : If Korea is a hotchpotch, what kind of hotchpotch would it be?I think some kind of Jjigae would be hotchpotchs.>>I think some kind of Jjigae would be a hotchpotch.For example, Gimchi-jjigae is made of gimchi and sliced pork.>>Correct!Recipe is very simple.>>The recipe is very simple.First, I put the sliced pork and Gimchi in a pot. And then I add sesame oil and fry them in the pot without water. >>Correct! When they get well mixed, I pour water until they are soaked into water. >>When they get mixed well, I pour water into it until they are soaked. And then boil them sufficiently and add some salt and vegetables. >>Correct It\'s all. >>Correct OR >> That\'s all.

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