October 10 - Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : If Korea is a hotchpotch, what kind of hotchpotch would it be?
I think some kind of Jjigae would be hotchpotchs.
For example, Gimchi-jjigae is made of gimchi and sliced pork.
Recipe is very simple.
First, I put the sliced pork and Gimchi in a pot. And then I add sesame oil and fry them in the pot without water. When they get well mixed, I pour water until they are soaked into water. And then boil them sufficiently and add some salt and vegetables. It's all.
강사 첨삭
What a hotchpotch! Reading this kind of composition truly makes me hungry.
Thank you for the detail process of making Gimchi-Jjigae, [이름]!
I think I can make one in a snap.
In my opinion, Korea can also be a hotchpotch of \"VISUAL CULTURES\". I bet you know this very well.
If you want us to discuss this a little further, please let me know.
I will just keep it hanging at this hour, just to awaken your curiosity.
I will catch you then!
Have a wonderful time.
_Klein
Q : If Korea is a hotchpotch, what kind of hotchpotch would it be?I think some kind of Jjigae would be hotchpotchs.>>I think some kind of Jjigae would be a hotchpotch.For example, Gimchi-jjigae is made of gimchi and sliced pork.>>Correct!Recipe is very simple.>>The recipe is very simple.First, I put the sliced pork and Gimchi in a pot. And then I add sesame oil and fry them in the pot without water.
>>Correct!
When they get well mixed, I pour water until they are soaked into water.
>>When they get mixed well, I pour water into it until they are soaked.
And then boil them sufficiently and add some salt and vegetables.
>>Correct
It\'s all.
>>Correct
OR >> That\'s all.
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