October 9th homework:The description about my closest friend

2019-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I met My Closest friend When I was a-first grader in high school. His name is Jun il Park. He is shorter than me. He has black eyes and hair. He likes to play baseball. He major in Physical distribution in Inha university. He had been to America for a year as an exchange student. Now, He is working in the company named Lotte.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I met My Closest friend When I was a-first grader in high school.
>> I met my closest friend when I was in first grade in high school.
His name is Jun il Park.
>> CORRECT!
He is shorter than me.
>> CORRECT!
He has black eyes and hair.
>> His eye color is black and he has black hair as well.
He likes to play baseball.
>> CORRECT!
He major in Physical distribution in Inha university.
>> He is majoring in Physical Distribution at Inha University.
He had been to America for a year as an exchange student.
>> He has been to America for a year as an exchange student.
Now, He is working in the company named Lotte.
>> He is now working in the company named Lotte.

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