Octopus
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Hi, [이름]!
Oh my! You just made me hungry. T_T
You know how much I love eating.
Anyway, thank you for sharing about eating octopus.
I know it\'s common in your country to eat it.
Have a good night. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
I am eating octopus now.
>> correct
It is really tasty seafood. I really like that.
>> It is really a tasty seafood and I like it.
Octopus is tastier than crackers.
>> correct
It is really tasty and the souce of the octopus is little spicy but tasty.
>> It is really tasty and the sauce of the octopus is a little spicy, but tasty.
If I eat octopus when I play baseball it will more help than eating gums.
>> If I eat octopus when I play baseball, it will be more helpful than chewing gums.
Eating octopus is the best time when it is midnight.
>> The best time to eat octopus is at midnight.
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