Octopus

2017-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

I am eating octopus now.It is really tasty seafood.I really like that.Octopus is tastier than crackers.It is really tasty and the souce of the octopus is little spicy but tasty.If I eat octopus when I play baseball it will more help than eating gums.Eating octopus is the best time when it is midnight.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Oh my! You just made me hungry. T_T

You know how much I love eating. 

Anyway, thank you for sharing about eating octopus.

I know it\'s common in your country to eat it.

Have a good night. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^_^

   

I am eating octopus now.

>> correct

It is really tasty seafood. I really like that.

>> It is really a tasty seafood and I like it.

Octopus is tastier than crackers.

>> correct

It is really tasty and the souce of the octopus is little spicy but tasty.

>> It is really tasty and the sauce of the octopus is a little spicy, but tasty.

If I eat octopus when I play baseball it will more help than eating gums.

>> If I eat octopus when I play baseball, it will be more helpful than chewing gums.

Eating octopus is the best time when it is midnight.

>> The best time to eat octopus is at midnight.

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