Odongdo.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Gabby.
I introduced about Odongdo my favorite place before.
Today, it will write means do transportation and use time.
It tooks airplane about 40 [이름]utes to there. Maybe it get for 5 hours by the car.
Ah, I went with my friends by the tour bus in summer last year.
That tine was very hot and hard and one of my friend was sick after trip.
The friend specially is very weak on the heat.
By the way I want to go to the Eight Views of DanYang.
I hope I will go to it in year.
Almost we couldn\'t go to for 5 months anywhere after the Thailand of trip.
Really I crave to go to anyplace.
Tell you drama tomorrow.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Great job. :)
- T. Gabby :)
Hello Gabby.
>> Correct.
I introduced about Odongdo my favorite place before.
I introduced about Odongdo my favorite place before.
>> I want to introduce Odongdo, my favorite place before.
Today, it will write means do transportation and use time.
Today, it will write means do transportation and use time.
>> Today, I will write means of transportation and the of use time.
It tooks airplane about 40 [이름]utes to there.
It tooks airplane about 40 [이름]utes to there.
>> It\'ll take 40 [이름]utes by airplane.
Maybe it get for 5 hours by the car.
>> Maybe you can get there in 4 hours by car.
Ah, I went with my friends by the tour bus in summer last year.
Ah, I went with my friends by the tour bus in summer last year.
>> I went there with my friends and have a tour by bus last summer.
That tine was very hot and hard and one of my friend was sick after trip.
That tine was very hot and hard and one of my friend was sick after trip.
>> That time it was very hot and it was hard for my friend because he got sick after the trip.
The friend specially is very weak on the heat.
The friend specially is very weak on the heat.
>> That friend felt week due to heat.
By the way I want to go to the Eight Views of DanYang.
By the way I want to go to the Eight Views of DanYang.
>> Correct.
I hope I will go to it in year.
I hope I will go to it in year.
>> I hope I can go there next year.
Almost we couldn\'t go to for 5 months anywhere after the Thailand of trip.
Almost we couldn\'t go to for 5 months anywhere after the Thailand of trip.
>> We couldn\'t go out for 5 months anywhere after the Thailand trip.
Really I crave to go to anyplace.
Really I crave to go to anyplace.
>> I am craving to travel.
Tell you drama tomorrow.
Tell you drama tomorrow.
>> I\'ll share my stories tomorrow.
Bye.
Bye.
>> Correct.
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