Of all the people you know, who lacks patience the most? Why?

2014-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am also one of the people who are impatient. I must admit that I’m short-tempered and get angry easily although I have been trying not to do. I regret immediately after I blow off. If I had been patient even for a few minutes or seconds, I would not had to say sorry to others and lost my face. Impatience raises our stress level and can even cause physical harm to our bodies. Being impatient can also damage relationships. The more patient I am with others, the likelier I am to be viewed positively by my colleagues, not to mention my family and friends. How can I be patient? I need to manage my emotions. I have a choice in how I react in every situation. Try to talk myself out of my impatient frame of mind. Remember myself how silly it is that I’m reacting this way. Take deep breaths and distance myself emotionally from the situation for a while. Make myself speak and move more slowly. It will appear to others as if I’m calm. If you lose patience, you will lose the game.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Sir [이름]! Thank you for always doing your essay. It is really important for us to be patient in every situation. I also sometimes become short tempered when I am sick. I think we should be careful with the words or actions we do. I appreicate your ideas in writing and class.It is nice that you are improving. ^^ Keep on talking and writing. Teacher Nina   I am also one of the people who are impatient. >> Correct! I must admit that I’m short-tempered and get angry easily although I have been trying not to do. >> I must admit that I\'m a short-tempered and get angry easily although I have been trying not to do it. I regret immediately after I blow off. >> Correct! If I had been patient even for a few minutes or seconds, I would not had to say sorry to others and lost my face. >> Correct! Impatience raises our stress level and can even cause physical harm to our bodies. >> Correct! Being impatient can also damage relationships. >> Correct! The more patient I am with others, the likelier I am to be viewed positively by my colleagues, not to mention my family and friends. >> Correct! How can I be patient? >> Correct! I need to manage my emotions. >> Correct! I have a choice in how I react in every situation. >> I have a choice on how I would react in every situation. Try to talk myself out of my impatient frame of mind. >> Try to talk to myself out of my impatient frame of mind. Remember myself how silly it is that I’m reacting this way. >> Correct!   Take deep breaths and distance myself emotionally from the situation for a while. >> Correct! Make myself speak and move more slowly. >> Correct! It will appear to others as if I’m calm. >> Correct! If you lose patience, you will lose the game. >> Correct!

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