Of course...
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Good evening!
How are you [이름]?
It\'s a raining in my city. =c
I hope that tomorrow will be a sunny day.
I admire Steve Jobs. How about you?
I watched the movie titled \"Internship\". You are going to love it.
It\'s about Google. ^^ Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
Of course, work or study disturbs our free time.
>> Correct
>> OR: Working or studying disturbs our leisure time.
Many business men working in a company are often disturbed by their boss\' or senior\'s calling even in their free time or vacation.
>> Many businessmen who are working in a company are often disturbed by their boss\' or senior\'s call even during their free time or vacation.
But these situation become different when someone really enjoy study or work.
>> But this situation becomes different when someone really enjoys studying or working.
>> OR: But this circumstance becomes different when someone loves studying or working.
For example, many people want to keep working If the work was fun like a game or sports.
>> Correct
>> OR: For example, a lot of people want to working if the environment is fun.
Let me check the circumstances of google, I heard many stories about their work place where they can take a rest whenever they want.
>> Did you mean: Let me check the circumstances in Google. I heard many stories about their workplace where they can take a rest whenever they want to.
Additionally their free time is flexible even making me think that Its place is more like a resting site than work place.
>> Additionally, their free time is flexible, it even makes me think that the place is more like a resting site than a workplace.
It is certain that enjoying is more easier than enduring.
>> Correct
I think work disturb our free time but people who really love their work don\'t feel any bored or think like that like a steve jobs(I don\'t know the exact name)
>> I think work distubs our free time but people how really love their job don\'t feel bored or they think like Steve Jobs.
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