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2014-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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In Korea these days, there is popular TV program, named of 'Superman comming Back'. This program is containing some stoies about father who carry out the duties of mothers. Without mothers, fathers have very hard time for raising their kids. One of fathers has thriple-baby, so he needs three times of energy than others. They are popular entertainers who have married their own partner. This program shows What is difficulty of raising their kids and the importance of mothers duties. But they handle all of the duties even they had hard time getting used to it. getting through some special task one by one, fathers are satisfied what they did . It is the intersting in this program which show us father can do what mothers do. And of course I will help my Carolyn when we have our baby~~ I get a courage from this program. and I also can deal with raising kids

강사 첨삭

Happy Midweek!

Wow! It\'s nice to hear that you are going to help Carolyn in the future.

It is really good that both partners are helping each other.

It will also strengthen your relationship.

Thanks for sharing a lot of things.

Teacher Nina


In Korea these days, there is popular TV program, named of \'Superman comming Back\'.
>> 
These days, there is a popular TV program titled, \"Superman coming Back\".

>> OR: These days, there is a popular TV program titled, \"The come back of Superman\".
This program is containing some stoies about father who carry out the duties of mothers.

>> This program contains some stories about a father who carry out the duties of a mother.

Without mothers, fathers have very hard time for raising their kids.

>> Without mothers, fathers will have a hard time raising their kids.
One of fathers has thriple-baby, so he needs three times of energy than others.

>> A father has triplets, so he needs to have three times of energy than other people.
They are popular entertainers who have married their own partner.

>> They are popular entertainers who are married.
This program shows What is difficulty of raising their kids and the importance of mothers duties.

>> This program shows the difficulty of raising kids and the important of a mother\'s duty.
But they handle all of the duties even they had hard time getting used to it.

>> But they were able to handle all of the duties even if they had a hard time getting used to it.
getting through some special task one by one, fathers are satisfied what they did .

>> Getting through some special task one by one, fathers are satisfied with what they did.

It is the intersting in this program which show us father can do what mothers do.
>> It is an interesting program which shows us fathers can do what mothers do.


And of course I will help my Carolyn when we have our baby~~

>> correct
I get a courage from this program.

>> Did you mean: I was encouraged by this program.
and I also can deal with raising kids

>> And also I can deal the difficulties in raising kids.

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