Of course!
학생이 쓴 원문
If you are buying an expensive item, do you compare prices at several shops and the Internet?
Of course I will!
When I buy something, I always compare prices at NAVER.
Searching the lowest price then I buy it.
Especially When I buy an expensive item, I compare more detailed and search many shops.
I think some people of my age enjoy comparing price.
Because they search something on the Internet familiarly.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ye Ji!
This is good practice.
Please take note of how you cut your thoughts into sentences.
Make direct and simple ones so that they will be easier to understand.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Of course I will!
>> Of course, I do.
When I buy something, I always compare prices at NAVER.
When I buy something, I always compare prices at NAVER.
>> When I buy something, I always compare prices u[이름]g NAVER.
Searching the lowest price then I buy it.
Searching the lowest price then I buy it.
>> I search for the lowest price and then, I buy it.
Especially When I buy an expensive item,
Especially When I buy an expensive item,
>> This is especially true when I buy an expensive item.
I compare more detailed and search many shops.
>> I carefully compare prices of things from many shops.
I think some people of my age enjoy comparing price.
I think some people of my age enjoy comparing price.
>> I think some people my age enjoy comparing prices.
Because they search something on the Internet familiarly.
Because they search something on the Internet familiarly.
>> It\'s because it\'s familiar for us to search for things on the Internet.
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