Of the things you have bought in your life while traveling, which do you remember most happily?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually I don\'t prefer to buy something while I\'m traveling except food or daily necessities.
But there is a thing that I still remember. That is a shirt that I bought in San-andreas, Colombia.
At that time, I needed a summer shirt. So I visited a clothes store and found a shirt that looks exotic and cheap.
Just after I bought that shirt, I usually wore that clothes.
After I finished that trip, I brought it in Korea and I still have it.
The thing that makes me awakened was the words in that shirt. \"Made in Korea\"
I bought a exotic Korean shirt at a Colombian store.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday, Ian.
The story that you mentioned here is a bit funny. I cannot imagine how shocked you are by the fact that you bought a shirt in Columbia only to find out that it was made in Korea. I think this will make your trip to Columbia more unforgettable.
-T. Caitlyn
Actually I don\'t prefer to buy something while I\'m traveling except food or daily necessities. But there is a thing that I still remember.
>> I actually don\'t prefer buying anything while I\'m traveling except for food or daily necessities but there is a thing that I still remember.
That is a shirt that I bought in San-andreas, Colombia.
>> It is a shirt that I bought in San Andres, Columbia.
At that time, I needed a summer shirt.
At that time, I needed a summer shirt.
>> CORRECT
So I visited a clothes store and found a shirt that looks exotic and cheap.
>> CORRECT
Just after I bought that shirt, I usually wore that clothes.
Just after I bought that shirt, I usually wore that clothes.
>> I wore it often after buying it.
After I finished that trip, I brought it in Korea and I still have it.
After I finished that trip, I brought it in Korea and I still have it.
>> After I finished that trip, I brought it to Korea and I still have it.
The thing that makes me awakened was the words in that shirt. \"Made in Korea\"
The thing that makes me awakened was the words in that shirt. \"Made in Korea\"
>> The shocking thing was what was written on the shirt; \"Made in Korea\".
I bought a exotic Korean shirt at a Colombian store.
I bought a exotic Korean shirt at a Colombian store.
>> I bought an exotic Korean shirt at a Colombian store.
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