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학생이 쓴 원문
The biggist problem with Cheong Wa Dae is isolation.
The president stays ia a seperate place for government offices.
He is known to eat alone. He had seldom communication chance with others.
In the end, he became a non-communicative president.
Of course, his fanatical supporters do not agree with these evaluation. They lost logical and rational thinking.
Yoon seems to be careful of these dismerits of his predecessor.
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Good day Ms. [이름]!!!
You are one of the most passionate students that I have. Take note that your passion will lead you to success in reaching your goal.
practice makes perfect so I always encourage you to be more expressive whenever you talk or write your thoughts.
Have fun learning!
Aki~
The biggist problem with Cheong Wa Dae is isolation.
>>> The biggest problem about Cheong Wae Dae is that it is situated in isolation.The president stays ia a seperate place for government offices.
>>> The President stays and works in a separate place from the government offices.
He is known to eat alone. He had seldom communication chance with others.
>>> He is known to eat alone. He had seldom a chance to communicate with others.
In the end, he became a non-communicative president.
>>> Correct!
Of course, his fanatical supporters do not agree with these evaluations.
>>> Correct!
They lost logical and rational thinking.
>>> Correct!
Yoon seems to be careful of these dismerits of his predecessor.
>>> Correct!
Yoon seems to be careful of these dismerits of his predecessor.
>>> Yoon seems to be cautious of these demerits as a predecessor.
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