office polices
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Keep the official working hours.
There are a lot of people who break it even if they have contracted business hours.
Regarding the work, don’t contact by personal chat (Kakao talk)
Even if important matter among us, I think that it is not advisable to keep in touch with personal chat.
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If you were to create your office policy, what two policies do you want to make? Why?
Keep the official working hours.
>> I want employees to keep the official working hours.
There are a lot of people who break it even if they have contracted business hours.
>>[NOTE: I\'M NOT SURE IF I UNDERSTOOD THIS SENTENCE CORRECTLY. ANYWAY, BELOW IS MY INTERPRETATION AND CORRECTION]
>> There are a lot of people who break it even if they signed a contract.
Regarding the work, don’t contact by personal chat (Kakao talk)
>> Employees have the right to “right to disconnect,” or disregard work-related communications sent to private numbers or messaging apps, such as KakaoTalk after work hours.
>> OR: Employees have the “right to disconnect,” or disregard work-related communications after office hours.
Even if important matter among us, I think that it is not advisable to keep in touch with personal chat.
>> No matter how important the matter is, I think that it is unacceptable to keep in touch through private messaging apps outside of work hours.
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