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학생이 쓴 원문
1.I don't like MILK. (U)
2. I prefer TEA.(U)
3. SCIENTISTS say that the environment is threatened by pollution.(C)
4. My mother uses BUTTER to prepare cakes.(U)
5.There are a lot of WINDOWS in our classroom. (C)
Hi~My online daugher!
Long time no see here.
Finally I received a good news.
You know already what is that.
Tnank you for your concern.
I am likely to have a nice weekend!!
I'm so happy to get a new job.
강사 첨삭
HI Ms. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework! Great Job! It\'s nice to hear that.
Wow! I am so happy for you. I knew it! Keep up the good work.
I hope that you had a wonderful day.Take Care! Enjoy your weekend. See you! Can\'t wait to talk with you.
You really deserve good news
T. Leny^^
Here are my corrections for you:
1.I don\'t like MILK. (U)
>>Correct2. I prefer TEA.(U)
>>Correct3. SCIENTISTS say that the environment is threatened by pollution.(C)
>>Correct4. My mother uses BUTTER to prepare cakes.(U)
>>Correct5.There are a lot of WINDOWS in our classroom. (C) >>CorrectHi~My online daugher!
>>Correct ( be careful with the spellig of \" daughter\")Long time no see here.
>>Long time no see.Finally I received a good news.
>>CorrectYou know already what is that.
>>CorrectTnank you for your concern.
>>Thank you for your concernI am likely to have a nice weekend!!
>>CorrectI\'m so happy to get a new job.
>>Correct
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