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2012-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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1.I don't like MILK. (U) 2. I prefer TEA.(U) 3. SCIENTISTS say that the environment is threatened by pollution.(C) 4. My mother uses BUTTER to prepare cakes.(U) 5.There are a lot of WINDOWS in our classroom. (C) Hi~My online daugher! Long time no see here. Finally I received a good news. You know already what is that. Tnank you for your concern. I am likely to have a nice weekend!! I'm so happy to get a new job.

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HI Ms. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework! Great Job!  It\'s nice to hear that. Wow! I am so happy for you. I knew it! Keep up the good work. I hope that you had a wonderful day.Take Care! Enjoy your weekend. See you! Can\'t wait to talk with you. You really deserve good news T. Leny^^ Here are my corrections for you: 1.I don\'t like MILK. (U) >>Correct2. I prefer TEA.(U) >>Correct3. SCIENTISTS say that the environment is threatened by pollution.(C) >>Correct4. My mother uses BUTTER to prepare cakes.(U) >>Correct5.There are a lot of WINDOWS in our classroom. (C) >>CorrectHi~My online daugher! >>Correct ( be careful with the spellig of \" daughter\")Long time no see here. >>Long time no see.Finally I received a good news. >>CorrectYou know already what is that. >>CorrectTnank you for your concern. >>Thank you for your concernI am likely to have a nice weekend!! >>CorrectI\'m so happy to get a new job. >>Correct

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