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2011-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I ate chichen for dinner. I am busy that finish on vacation.. My company close in winter. So I'm tired. I'll change the time your class next week. I'll concentrat to you.

강사 첨삭

Hey, I guess you are back for work again, and isn't it great that winter will end soon. I would be glad to spend longer time with you! Remember to call the manager about it, okay? Happy weekend! T.Bianca   I ate chichen for dinner. >>correctI am busy that finish on vacation.. >>I am busy because the vacation has finally ended.My company close in winter. >>My company was closed during winter.So I'm tired. >>correct.I'll change the time your class next week. >>I'll have my class time changed next week.I'll concentrat to you. >>I will concentrate on you.

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