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2011-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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Q: What is the most impressive thing that has happened in your student life so far? In my student life most impressive that I was worked at academy as a English teacher. I was also student though called teacher. I taught to primary school student so It is not difficult to me. While I was in student I learned a pure heart thanks to children. The most impressive happen is there is on Teacher's day in Korea. I was given to them lots of letters and events so when I am down I remind of the day. I won't forget the day even forever because the day is very special to me.

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This is the continuation of my corrections: ^^, Q: What is the most impressive thing that has happened in your student life so far?In my student life most impressive that I was worked at academy as a English teacher. >> The most impressive thing in my student life was when I worked at an academy as an English teacher.  I was also student though called teacher. >>  They called me teacher even if I was just also a student.I taught to primary school student so It is not difficult to me. >> I taught primary school students so it wasn’t that difficult for me.While I was in student I learned a pure heart thanks to children >> My students taught me how to have an innocent way of thinking. The most impressive happen is there is on Teacher's day in Korea. >> I was most impressed during our Teacher’s day.I was given to them lots of letters and events so when I am down I remind of the day. >> I received lots of letters from them and I use these letters to remind me of good memories especially when I feel down. I won't forget the day even forever because the day is very special to me. >> I will never forger this day, because this day is very special to me.

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