oh :D
학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no write even though I've heard your voice :)
I've come to the library as usual and I'll catch your call here.
Actually, I didn't go outside because of today's terrible weather.
Many people who live in Daegu as well as Busan near Japan are frightened of nuclear materials in the air which might come from Japan.
In fact, it is the bare possibility of the materials according to the Korean forcast.
But the German forecast announced its possiblity in our religion yesterday.
It has been raining today so I'm reluctant to touch a little drop.
It's the weather for me to avoid going to the library, never hating studying.
I'm here, though.
There is a guy near my seat in the library.
To be countinued next my composition :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Honestly I was also hesitating about the rain here in my country.
It has been raining since Tuesday and somehow I feel paranoid about it though there were no reports if the radio activity will ever reach in the Philippines.
Hopefully, the rain is safe.
-Tiny^0^
Long time no write even though I've heard your voice :)
>> Correct
I've come to the library as usual and I'll catch your call here.
>> Correct
Actually, I didn't go outside because of today's terrible weather.
>>CorrectMany people who live in Daegu as well as Busan near Japan are frightened of nuclear materials in the air which might come from Japan.
>> Many people who live in Daegu as well as Busan which are near Japan are frightened of nuclear materials in the air which might come from Japan.
In fact, it is the bare possibility of the materials according to the Korean forcast.
>> In fact, it is the bare possibility of the materials according to the Korean forecast.
>>spelling check: forecastBut the German forecast announced its possiblity in our religion yesterday.
>> But the German forecast announced its possibility in our region yesterday.
>>spelling check: possibility; regionIt has been raining today so I'm reluctant to touch a little drop.
>>CorrectIt's the weather for me to avoid going to the library, never hating studying.
>> It's the weather that I’m avoiding going to the library, never the studying.
I'm here, though.
>>CorrectThere is a guy near my seat in the library.
>> Correct
To be countinued next my composition :)
>> To be continued in my next composition. :)
>>spelling check: continued.
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