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Hi, beautiful [이름]!
You made me smile today. I miss you. I miss your laughs. I miss your jokes. And I miss your wise opinions. I뭢 glad you뭨e back being happy! Let뭩 talk on Monday. Have a meaningful holy weekend and a joyful Easter on Sunday!
Loving you always,
T. Joanna
hey pretty!
>>Hey,
pretty!
yesterday, i went to bed at 11 a clock.
>>Yesterday,
I went to bed at 11 o뭖lock.
and i wanted to get a call from you.
but i can't get up at 7 am.
>> Though
I wanted to get a call from you but I couldn뭪 get up at 7 am.
and i thought that i can get up by your call.
>>I
thought your call could wake me up.
when i opened my eyes, i found that i woke up at
almost 10 am.
>>When
I woke up and opened my eyes it was about 10:00 am already.
and i realized that you didn't have to call me
because of holiday!
>>I
came to realize that you don뭪 need to call me because it is a holiday.
you know what? i'm try to get your call :)
>>You
know what? I뭢 still expecting your call.
today, the wether is bad, but my feel is good.
>>The
weather is not good today but I feel good.
i will get a test at 7 pm. and i will study
english all this weekend!
>>I will take a test this 7pm
and I will study English the whole weekend.
>> I
will take a test this 7pm and I will study English all weekend.
thank you! have a nice weekend pretty!
>>Thank you! Have a nice weekend, pretty!
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