Oh, I also think that that's a good way for me!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Debby :)
Oh, that's a good idea! It will help me adapt to use English.
Next time, I will try it and get some coffee as well. :D
Fortunately, I know several songs for that. Why hadn't I thought about that? haha
I could surely feel that I can't speak well in being sleepy. I hope that way can give me some help for waking up. kk
Then see you later XD
<Essay>
It's selflessness. I don't want to make a selfish friend. They wouldn't be good friend forever! Being honest and sincere is the most important thing for me to get a friend. If they aren't, I will not be a friend with them! I think it is important to help each other when we fall in trouble.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Yes a brilliant idea indeed!
It\'s also a way for me to make you practice a song so you can sing to me! hahahahahaha
That is a great idea don\'t you think?
And the coffee sounds good too!^^
Selfish people must not be your friends.
You will just end up being frustrated!^^
I\'ll talk to you later!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi there Debby ^^
>> CORRECT
OR> Hello Debby^^Oh, that\'s a good idea!
>> CORRECT
OR> That\'s just brilliant!^^
It will help me adapt to use English.
>> It will help me adapt in using English.Next time, I will try it and get some coffee as well. :D
>> CORRECT
OR> I will do that with coffee sometime!^^Fortunately, I know several songs for that.
>> CORRECT
OR> good thing I have some songs for that!
Why hadn\'t I thought about that? haha
>> CORRECT
Or> It has never crossed my mind!^^I could surely feel that I can\'t speak well in being sleepy.
>> I could surely feel that I can\'t speak well when I\'m sleepy.
I hope that way can give me some help for waking up. kk
>> I hope that way, it can give me some help to wake up. kkThen see you later XD
>> CORRECT
OR> See you in a while.<Essay>It\'s selflessness.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s selfishness
I don\'t want to make a selfish friend.
>> CORRECT
OR> I don\'t want to be friends with a selfish person!^^
They wouldn\'t be good friend forever!
>> They wouldn\'t be a good friend forever!
Being honest and sincere is the most important thing for me to get a friend.
>> CORRECT
OR> Honesty and Sincerity is very important for me for a friend.
If they aren\'t, I will not be a friend with them!
>> If they aren\'t, I will not be a friend for them!
I think it is important to help each other when we fall in trouble.
>> CORRECT
OR> It is very important to be there for a friend if they need one.
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