Oh, I also think that that's a good way for me!

2014-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi there Debby :) Oh, that's a good idea! It will help me adapt to use English. Next time, I will try it and get some coffee as well. :D Fortunately, I know several songs for that. Why hadn't I thought about that? haha I could surely feel that I can't speak well in being sleepy. I hope that way can give me some help for waking up. kk Then see you later XD <Essay> It's selflessness. I don't want to make a selfish friend. They wouldn't be good friend forever! Being honest and sincere is the most important thing for me to get a friend. If they aren't, I will not be a friend with them! I think it is important to help each other when we fall in trouble.

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Hi there^^ Yes a brilliant idea indeed! It\'s also a way for me to make you practice a song so you can sing to me! hahahahahaha That is a great idea don\'t you think? And the coffee sounds good too!^^ Selfish people must not be your friends. You will just end up being frustrated!^^ I\'ll talk to you later!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi there Debby ^^ >> CORRECT OR> Hello Debby^^Oh, that\'s a good idea! >> CORRECT OR> That\'s just brilliant!^^ It will help me adapt to use English. >> It will help me adapt in using English.Next time, I will try it and get some coffee as well. :D >> CORRECT OR> I will do that with coffee sometime!^^Fortunately, I know several songs for that. >> CORRECT OR> good thing I have some songs for that!  Why hadn\'t I thought about that? haha >> CORRECT Or> It has never crossed my mind!^^I could surely feel that I can\'t speak well in being sleepy. >> I could surely feel that I can\'t speak well when I\'m sleepy. I hope that way can give me some help for waking up. kk >> I hope that way, it can give me some help to wake up. kkThen see you later XD >> CORRECT OR> See you in a while.<Essay>It\'s selflessness. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s selfishness I don\'t want to make a selfish friend. >> CORRECT OR> I don\'t want to be friends with a selfish person!^^  They wouldn\'t be good friend forever! >> They wouldn\'t be a good friend forever!  Being honest and sincere is the most important thing for me to get a friend. >> CORRECT OR> Honesty and Sincerity is very important for me for a friend. If they aren\'t, I will not be a friend with them! >> If they aren\'t, I will not be a friend for them!  I think it is important to help each other when we fall in trouble. >> CORRECT OR> It is very important to be there for a friend if they need one.

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